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Red Run Chapter 14-15

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

After the events of the movie "Serenity", our crew struggles on.

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Red Run 14: Hell World

At Ita Moon

Mal waited impatiently near the airlock. His purported ride taking longer than he’d imagined when he’d come down to wait. On the point of abandoning the area and returning to the bridge, Mal heard the chime of the intercom.

“Shuttle craft approaching from Ita Moon processing, Captain,” River advised. “Docking in 90 seconds.”

Nodding his satisfaction at the end of the delay, Mal waited for the shuttle to lock on. “”Bout time,” Mal muttered.

The intercom spoke again. “I’ll be down to the kitchen after I make sure the Captain is away and pick out my weapons, Jayne.” River added soberly.

“That’ll go over well,” Mal thought. “Luckily, I won’t be here to see it.”

A reverberation ran through the deck into Mal’s feet, his only clue that the shuttle had docked. A speaker near the airlock rang out it’s standard dock warning.

Checking to make sure the seals were properly engaged and pressure equalized, Mal waited until the Ita shuttle popped her doors before popping his own. Just common sense in the event that the Ita shuttle was a Trojan horse. In this instance the shuttle failed to disgorge a crowd of heavily armed Federals or slavers, and this suited Mal just fine.

Leaving his ship and walking into the shuttle, Mal observed again the squalid conditions under which Ita Processing treated its guests. Luxuries like a well-lit interior, charming colors of paint on the walls, or a once yearly cleaning were obviously disregarded as wasteful extravagances for the brief passengers that transited to the Ita processing facility abroad the company shuttle. Most of the overhead lighting had blown out, and there were papers and visible dirt littering the floor plates.

Additionally, the shuttle interior was small. Slightly bigger than Serenity’s shuttles, honestly, but seemingly more cramped because of the 20 odd lime green passenger chairs that lined each side of the walls. Fitted as close as they were, elbowroom became an unfunny myth. Or would have, if the shuttle had been oc

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 05:33
With you reposting this story does that mean there is more coming? I really am in love with this story. Since Jayne is my favorite character I love how you have wrote him in this story. I feel so sorry for him cause they still don't trust him and are quick to blame him for everything. I was so scared Zoe was going to kill him.

I cried when Wash helped Jayne land the shuttle on Serenity's shuttle pad. That was just way to cool. And Stitch being there trying to keep Jayne awake. I loved that part.

Looking forward to more so I am really hoping the repost means there is more coming real soon.

Good job!
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 18:52
Lovely, action packed end to the story. I thought that I'd read it somewhere before but it made for a good second read.

Will you be continuing this at any point? I'd definitely like to read more.
Saturday, 16 September 2006 02:20
Just finished rereading your story from begin to end for the 3rd or 4th time. I am very glad you reposted it and really hope you keep going. I really want to know where it goes from here.
Monday, 18 September 2006 00:38
Oh...you'd better not leave us hanging here again, BlackRabbit. Cuz the last time I read this, I spent the next few months waiting for more. So get to it..or you're gonna have a few irked Browncoats on ya;)

On a happier note, I totally loved how you set up the whole ambush and the growing tension of how things would pan out. Actually freaked out again when I read how River seemed to fall at Jayne's shot...but I am damn glad you had them survive. Cuz I really hope this can help them (and the rest of the crew) trust one another:D

BEB
DESERTGIRL
Monday, 18 September 2006 04:40
I spent the week end reading the whole thing and really liked it. In particular I enjoyed the way the characters interacted and discussed their feelings. Not sure if joss would hae done it that way. But it was nice.

I feel like there were alot of loose ends that did not get resolved by the end however.

What eer happened with Captain Beck's job?
Why did they want to kidnap River?
When is Jayne going to tell Zoe that Wash helped him land the shuttle?
What were the other two messagesMal received?
How did Inara's meeting go?

Perhaps there is another chapter coming?

Sunday, 21 September 2008 04:14
I'd LOVE to see more of this story!! Unfortunately, you've seemed to disappear from FFF... I'm not above begging/grovaling... *begs and grovels* see!
Friday, 18 December 2009 07:17
I wonder if I ought to at least explain where this was going as a story just to offer some closure. Or if it's been too long. Anyone? Bueller?

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