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Red Run Chapters 1-5

Wednesday, September 13, 2006

Set after the events of the movie "Serenity", our heros struggle to find themselves, stay ahead of the gorram Feds, and deal with old enemies.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2703    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Red Run 1: Runnin’

(Warning: Serenity Movie Spoilers)

Serenity, Firefly, and any mention of the ‘Verse associated with them is entirely the property of the storytelling genius Joss Whedon, and also the property of the evil Fox Corporation. This fanfic is not for reproduction nor for sale. It is freely distributed as an effort of appriciation.

Time: Few weeks after the deaths of Shepard and Wash.

Mal reflected for a moment on the situation of Serenity and her crew.

They weren’t rich, but they weren’t poor neither. Money that they’d stolen during the Trading Station Robbery was still available, even though they’d been hit by Reavers during that raid and nearly lost Jayne after he was shot thru the leg with a Reaver harpoon. Later, after an ill-fated but successful effort to expose an Alliance plot hatched on the forgotten out-world of Miranda, Serenity had crashed and been forced to sit idle for a few weeks at the base of one Mr. Universe, Cortex guru and all around techno-junkie….now deceased at the hands of an operative for the Alliance Parliament. An operative who’d seen the error of his ways.

Plenty of parts had been available after an epic battle between a fleet of Reavers and a matching squad of Alliance ships in the Black above this world. Enough parts to sorta repair Serenity well enough for flight, and with a number of parts left over as gravy for resale.

Salvaging valuable parts from destroyed Reaver and Alliance vessels, and from Mr. Universe’s lair, had proven to be lucrative…albeit emotionally distasteful. Looting the dead presented few problems to Mal. Stealing from a person Mal knew, and who he owed a tremendous debt of gratitude to, did. Taking from Mr. Universe skirted dangerously close to this self-perceived line in Mal’s mind. Amazingly, it was Jayne who’d solved the moral dilemma one day while Mal had stood at the loading ramp, looking upon the surrounding landscape of the somewhat bleak world.

“Reckon we can’t leave all this stuff just lyin’ around, eh Mal?” Jayne’s

Comments
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 14:28
I really enjoyed reading this. I read every word and I don't always do that with fan fics especially if they are long. I thought the characterizations were great. I look forward to the rest of the story.
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 16:08
Mal's figuring out what happened reads very much like a CSI episode. Nicely done. Simon, of all of them, seemed a bit out of character in the beginning chapters. A bit too formal. Especially, since this is after Miranda.

His fight with Mal and the conversations in between their fight were just hysterical and very much in character.

This was reaalllyy long though. I wish you'd have broken it up into one chapter at a time instead of five at once. Makes it a bit harder to sit and read all the way through.

But I'm definitely hooked, when I have time, I'll be sitting down to read the rest.
Thursday, 14 September 2006 02:41
Glad to see you decided to finally repost these. I really hope you continue on with the story you have already started.
Sunday, 17 September 2006 19:47
While I have to agree with Leiasky over the length of this fanfic (even in spurts of two chapters per submission would be better management)...I am certainly glad you have decided to repost this series. Cuz it's freaking brilliant!

Totally loving the Mal vs. Simon argument over River and her behaviour, though I am certainly glad River's inserting herself into the mix. Have to stand up for her rights and all;)

And I certainly intrigued (again) by how you're having River possess a hidden agenda for seeming staying a bit loopy in the brainpan to avoid the rise of new tensions over what she really knows. It's logical but disheartening to think that would be the outcome if her mental state was classifed as more than 75% stable;)

BEB

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