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That Kinda Wound

Saturday, October 10, 2009

Post BDM: Oneshot; Mal & Zoe

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3862    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Absolutely nothing to do with that other universe I've been playing in. Just a short exercise to make sure I can still approach canon well.

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Zoe arched a brow, and looked sideways at Mal.

“I last served under Willby and his gang.” The wiry man kept on running his thumb across his goatee. “The ‘Tough Love’, Vesper model.”

“We run a Firefly.” Zoe looked like a wet cat. She hadn’t even touched her mug of ale as the thick smell of alcohol and tobacco stung their noses. The saloon was raucous, dark, dank, and the perfect place to look for employees. She kept on giving Mal the sideways glare.

Mal shifted in his seat. Zoe’s eyes were like hellfire they were. Made a man nervous, like he needed to guard his underbelly.

“Old as dirt, hold up well.” He sniffed, his eyes homely and grey as he took a drink if saki. Slamming the cup onto the wooden table, he flashed a toothy smile. “I can handle that. Flown a few in my day. Unfortunately I’m gettin’ long in the tooth.”

“No need for apologies.” Mal poured him another cup. “I need someone with some history. Person that’s seen the ‘Verse knows the thing our two about tight sitcheeations. We don’t want no one green.” He then poured himself a cup of saki and tossed it back.

“Well I surely ain’t green Mr. Reynolds.”

Smacking his lips, he settled his arms on the cheaply made table. “Good, but I wanna hear more about this crew you flew for. Reckon’ I haven’t had the pleasure of knowing a Willby nor a fine vessel like you described.”

“We hauled cargo of a questionable nature.” He pulled out a tin case “Always arriving on schedule, nary a hiccup. Kept ‘em safe in the sky...”

“So why are you out here hustlin’ for a job?” Zoe cut him off, sharply.

He pulled out a cigarette, sticking it betwixt his lips. “Time ta move on, Miss.” He dug into his jacket pocket and fumbled for his light. “Folks change, crews change, weren’t who we were when we first started runnin’ together. Time to leave in my book.” He found the

Comments
Saturday, 10 October 2009 11:32
This little talk between Mal and Zoe had to happen at some point and I loved the way you did it. Zoe is the only one Mal can be honest with and vice versa.

Saturday, 10 October 2009 20:00
Nice job Ash, with Mal and Zoe, and I always enjoy your OCs;)
Saturday, 10 October 2009 20:28
I liked this and could so easily see it panning out this way and why. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 11 October 2009 11:16
Very nice little piece. And Mal's right - that kind of wound never heals clean, but maybe it can heal a little.
Sunday, 11 October 2009 18:10
This made me sniffle some manful tears...Mal's right and Zoe is the only person who should be with him on this choice...especially this one. Bravo.
Monday, 12 October 2009 21:22
I love the job advertisement sign! I can just imagine the scratchy handwriting...
Tuesday, 13 October 2009 06:20
See i liked this. It's a totally plausable fic and like the characters are still alive somewhere, which is neat..

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