Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Four

Friday, October 16, 2009

Post-BDM; Reg Crew; OCs; Inara/Mal, Simon/Kaylee, River/Oc: Four times Inara Serra walked in on River Tam

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Still nothing to do with Gifted Ones (though I have touched it). You could link this one to the last and say they occurred in same universe. This however is just another exercise.

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*one*

“I missed havin’ passengers.” Kaylee beamed as she flitted about the galley in her floral half apron, the sizzle of freeze dried vegetables and protein filling the air. Her smile stretched the grease smudges on her cheeks as she pushed the vittles around the old wok. “I know the Cap’n isn’t fond’a taking on passengers, but it’s so nice ta meet new people.”

Inara smiled, hanging on the fringes of the galley. “I can understand his suspicions though,” she cradled her mug of tea as a sigh escaped her “since Miranda it is harder to trust others.” Her dark eyes flitted off to the side as Zoe walked in with her air of authority. The Amazon paused, allowed herself a disdainful look to the helm where the new pilot sat, and headed off to make rounds.

“I know, admit I was a tad shy when they first came on board.” Kaylee missed Zoe’s sour face as she was too busy humming and swaying to the songs filling her head. “But we’re gettin’ paid, and they all seem like nice folks, headin’ out ta settle.”

“What’s this?” Simon came jogging up the stairs, dressed nicely yet sensibly. His eyes shimmered at Kaylee as he swooped in. “There you are.” Simon exclaimed as his arms gamely encircled her hips, his movements energetic.

“Simon!” She shrieked, joyfully as his hands squeezed her waist in a wicked way. The smell of him, cologne and linen, filled her nose as she could feel his mouth grinning against her neck.

A laugh rose up from his chest towards her shriek as he smelled the nape of her neck. Oh how she smelled of oxidized metal and oil. It was like the scent of rosebuds in a fait perfume to him though, and he kissed her salty neck. “I’ve been looking all over for you.”

“Ya have?” Kaylee set the spoon aside and leaned back against his chest. He supported her weight easily as he rested his cheek to

Comments
Friday, 16 October 2009 23:37
Well done! I like this variation. Particularly the integration of Inara's Companion Status and still having a relationship with Mal.

And River's experimentation with Sex seems spot on. She's both innocent and experienced at the same time. I would imagine in your setting she would feel left out with everyone else in relationships. Having her fall in love with Inara's adopted daughter is a twist I wouldn't have thought of.

Bravo Ash, Bravo


Bri
Friday, 16 October 2009 23:41
Interesting progression. I'd like to know more about Inara adopting the two girls. :)

*Rages @ pilot in the second part* Did he say that to River? He's lucky he wasn't killed, but I hope someone knocked out all his teeth! Was he harassing Zoe too, then? Or did Zoe know?

On River and relationships: Hmm. Well, you'd hope that eventually River might find someone. Newspapers tell me it's not impossible for someone with her condition. I will be glad she's obviously in a better place in your fic, and that Inara and Mal and all the others are there to watch out for her.
Saturday, 17 October 2009 03:57
Brilliant, Ash, I really like how Mal learned to relish the good things in their relationship and how he gave Inara time to balance her family with her work and how both didn’t give up on what they could create together.

River finally finding the right partner that loves her, a logical and appropriate progression for her.
So Jayne loses an eye and part of an ear, is there a story in that?

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