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No More Games

Friday, July 11, 2003

This is the story of what happens after Heart of Gold. It contains spoilers for that episode. This started out as a snippet for the ff_friday challenge. The subject was Games. But somehow, along the way, it got too big for the challenge.

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All the usual caveats and addendums. This one takes place two days after the end of Heart of Gold. It contains spoilers for that episode. If you seen the episode or read the script, you probably have a pretty good guess what this is about. This started out as a snippet for the ff_friday challenge. The subject was Games. But somehow, along the way, it got too big for the challenge.

No More Games

Mal had been stewing for two days now. It was time to go confront the woman and get some things off his chest. Kaylee had just asked him why he had been so cranky lately and he hadn’t had the heart to tell her the reason. Anyway, she wanted to leave; it was her job to tell the rest of the crew, not his. Gorram woman. Yep, it was more than past time to have it all out in the open. He stalked off to Inara’s shuttle pushing Jayne and Book out of the way in the hall without even noticing they were there.

As he barged in, he said, "Inara, how’s about we don’t play any more games."

"Good morning to you too, Mal. What can I do for you?" As usual, Inara looked calm and composed. He suspected she didn’t feel that way inside, but he’d take calm and composed over screaming any day, so he guessed he shouldn’t bitch about it even though that, too, was a game of sorts.

"I know you don’t particularly want to talk about this, but I mean to have my say. It would be a kindness if you let me say what I need to with no interruptions. Then you can say whatever you feel is necessary and we can get this all out in the open."

The only thing that betrayed her upset, a slight tightening of her lips. Internally she struggled for control before replying. "I’ve told you I’m leaving, Mal. I don’t see where there is anything else to discuss. But go ahead, since I know you will anyway."

"If there was nothing more to discuss, you would have told me where to drop you off and you would have told the rest of the crew you were leaving. Seems to me that means you ain’t really serious; just using this an excuse to get me all riled up, so I

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 July 2003 08:24
<i>Man could live for a long time on a memory.</i>

Lovely, poignant and sad. Very well written. I came and read it after reading the challenge. Although personally I am with Mal on the not letting Companionhood define you. There are many ways to heal. If I had even a shot at Mal I get my RN in a heartbeat!:)
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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 July 2003 10:10
What an incredible story about the most interesting characters on Serenity. I am a Mal Inara shipper and think this is how their future would have developed. Loved that their love was culminated before Inara was leaving. Perhaps it might have changed things. Great story and give us more MI ship.
malinara
Friday, 11 July 2003 14:10
I liked it! It is a nice way to conclude and reconcile the sexual tension between them, and I think it is an honest way things would be. The language sounded right. Good work
MALSANGEL
Friday, 11 July 2003 19:00
This was beautiful. Sad, heartwarming and bittersweat. You got the characters down wonderfully, very true.

And it's very realistic. I could never imagine a "and they lived happily ever after together" for Mal and Inara. Not because of who they are. If they did try and stay together, eventually they would destroy each other. While the ending is sad. It's right.

Good stuff! :-)

MA
Friday, 11 July 2003 19:23
Very good Gem. I was going to say I liked the short version better, but this one eventually pulled me in as well. I hate to see Inara go, but perhaps you're right. I don't think they could ever be happy together, but I'd like them to try for a bit longer.

The intimate scene was well written, giving enough description whithout giving too much, nice job.

Karen
Saturday, 12 July 2003 04:53
Very sweet! I love Mal knowing that he could make her stay, but it wouldn't last and it would hurt them more in the end.

And how she doesn't want to give up Companionin' cause it's all she knows. Wow, being trained for whoredom at 2, poor child.
Saturday, 12 July 2003 05:27
Nice Gem. Too bad they couldn't work it out, but at least they have their memory.

And since Mal has his own boat, things can always change. ;)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 July 2003 06:13
OMG, WOW....that was great GEM. I LOVE the end...OMG, great love scenes in there....just....WOW!

OK, this stupid thing keeps saying I'm anonymous, even after I re-logged-in.
But, it's me GF.
Wednesday, 16 July 2003 02:44
Hi Gem.

Very nice piece of fic. I love M/I stories (I am a sap for romance) and you handled the whole whore/pirate situation masterfully. Way to go.

Sequel?

Inara: Strikes Back or The Return of the Companion. ;P
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 12:45
Excellent but oh boy did it tear at the heartstrings. I loved how well Mal put his feelings and thoughts to Inara and how she felt the same about him but just couldn't give up her Companion ways even for love of him. I would truly love to see a sequel where they are parted for a while and are brought back together by the simple, irresistable power of an all consuming love. Denied but not dead. Never that. Bless you, loved this even through my tears. Ali D :~)
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