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Change of Heart

Thursday, June 19, 2003

Malcolm Reynolds shook up Cdr. Harken's black and white view of the 'verse. Ever wonder what that meeting led to later?

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This is one that was inspired by my ficlet in the ff_Fridays (http://www.livejournal.com/community/ff_Friday) challenge. This week we were to write from the perspective of one of the guest stars or recurring characters. I chose to explore what the commander of the Alliance ship felt after his encounter with Mal and the Reaver wanna-be. I wrote the following snippet:

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From Commander Harken’s personal diary

It was one of the strangest days in my life. I started the day sure that Reavers didn’t exist. Alliance had told me they were a story made up by the people on the Rim as an excuse for their illegal actions and I’d believed it. But today, one of them tried to kill me, so now I knew Alliance was wrong.

I’d been sure that people who fought for the Independents were evil and couldn’t be trusted. Alliance told me that and I’d believed it. But Malcolm Reynolds was a former Independent soldier and he’d saved my life. Even stranger, he’d had no real reason to. I’d had him arrested and threatened to take away his ship and he was even handcuffed. No one would have thought it odd if he hadn’t pulled the Reaver off me. None of my men were trying to help and they didn’t have any reason to hate me, but Malcolm Reynolds did. His war record suggested he was a good leader; the kind men follow into hell and back. His crew were obviously all very loyal, too. Hell, after this afternoon, I’d trust him at my back anytime. So now I knew Alliance was wrong about that too.

Alliance told me that all the ships out here on the rim were questionable, That they all ran illegal goods or were scavengers or slavers. I’d never questioned why that would be so. Alliance told me and I believed it. Now I wonder. Serenity was running on the wrong side of the law. They did have goods that they’d salvaged illegally from that ship. But they obviously weren’t getting real rich from illegal trade, so why were they doing it? And what would make respectable people like the Shepherd and the Companion stay on a ship like that? And the

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 19 June 2003 05:04
BC

Alright, Mal helped forment another fight for Independence. I hate the word rebellion because I don't totally believe in it. Freedom is worth fighting for even if it takes twenty years to win.
The verse is more gray than black and white. For some people who are easily brainwashed by their governments its a hard lesson to learn. Good to see that Commander Harken was willing to listen to reason even if it was coming from a Browncoat.
Thursday, 19 June 2003 16:44
Oh, Gem I love the new ending. Perfect. Well written, as always. Take care, my friend.
Wednesday, 17 March 2004 02:01
When I read that last line I let out an audible " OOOhhh "

Really shiny, thanks
Thursday, 09 December 2004 22:55
Loved this to bits. It would be on my 'wish list' of shiny outcomes. Very good, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 16:49
"One man can't summon the future.

In every revolution , there's one man with a vision. Be that one man!"

Star Trek "Mirror, Mirror"

Points off for some awkwardess of language, but the sentiment is sound.

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