Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
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Friday, 01 May 2009 19:48
Ooh, fancy report font.

Poor Jayne! He's just getting everyone mad at him and digging himself in worse, isn't he?
Friday, 01 May 2009 19:51
Oh Jayne.

Is Tori going to get her scum-uppance? Ouch.

Somehow you always give the right amount of weight to each character. I always really enjoy your Wash.
Saturday, 02 May 2009 00:38
Awesome Wash voice - even the lame mercenary joke sounded so much like him. Would love to hear what was actually going through Malcolm's head right now. He must be so confused at this point. The plot with the Alliance is getting a lot more interesting. Still wondering which side some of these characters are really on!
Saturday, 02 May 2009 20:01
Two chapters in two weeks, you're spoiling us.

Your Mal pre war characterization continues to be amazing.

Poor Zoe, though, leadership has its drawbacks, and I like how you are creating subtle tension in her marriage because of it, very realistic and believable.
Thursday, 07 May 2009 05:21
I really don't know who to be most fascinated by. Zoe, fraying at the edges to keep it all together and becoming seriously scary in the process.. (Cold!) Or perhaps River, with her heartbreaking petulance and still that core of kindness and reason underneat that she's rather ignore.. Or Kaylee, torn between everyone, and still the one person who can put Mal at ease.. Or Inara, painfully sorry but also way too determined to let it keep her down completely.. And that's not even covering Simon and Wash and.. Mal. And the thickening plot!

Whee! Loving this series, still and forver. Thank you for posting a new part! Do it again! *g*

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