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Retribution: Chapter 13

Friday, March 6, 2009

The New Haven Series; Post BDM; M/I, S/K: FINAL CHAPTER. An explanation is in order, and the story winds down as a new arc begins....

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"Anyone know what's goin' on?" Jayne growled as he stood by the counter, chewing breakfast.

"Dunno, somethin' big though by the looks of it." Hershel, sleeves rolled up as he stood over the stove with a ladle and spooned out servings of conjee for their bedridden guests. "Possibly something to do with those little ones is my guess." he nodded off towards the table, where Inara sat with the two small children.

He frowned. "Two little pups? That what the fuss is all about?"

"Probably." Inara was watching them, having taken a break from coloring she had fetched them some chow for them and the little ones were eating with gusto. "They've been hiding in that other ship since it touched down and there was quite a reaction this morning."

"Doctor saw them and just about looked like he swallowed a spider." Mal's father agreed with a head nod.

Meilin eyed the food the other children ate and reached for it from her mother's lap, jabbering loudly.

"Hell they ain't nothin." Jayne wolfed down more food. "Ain't like gettin' a naked girl in a cryo box."

Hershel raised his eyebrows, but said nothing.

Virgil, the closest bed to the kitchen, listened carefully.

Inara, cleared her throat, shooting him a sideways glance. "At any rate..."

Jayne was oblivious. "Probably Simon's..." He reasoned.

Zoe slipped out of her room as the conversation continued.

"Probably knocked that other doctor up." the mercenary masticated, his voice dulled with so much food crammed in his mouth.

Inara glanced to the unknown whelps, they were too busy enjoying their bacon, eggs, milk and jam slathered toast. Too into the yummy food to listen in on Jayne's remarks.

"She found River, River read her mind some and they decided ta spring it on ol' lover boy..."

"Why don't you quit runnin' your mouth." Zoe announced stiffly as she limped over to the kitchen. "Whre is the lady doc by the way?"

"Off with Simon, Mal, Kaylee and River." The ex-companion announced.

"Well he's gotta knack for attractin' surprises now

Comments
Friday, 06 March 2009 11:01
I just wanted to thank all of the readers as well as those who commented. Comments of all kinds are always a welcome sight. Praise boosts the writer's ego (we have such horrible egos) and criticism brings us down to ground level as well as improve the story. Also thanks to my buddy whom I bounced drafts/ideas/story arcs off of. You know who you are, and I seriously couldn't have gotten through this crazy piece of work (that's a platform for more to come) I envisioned without you.

Time for sleep,

Ash
Friday, 06 March 2009 13:00
Wow. The pending "insurection" led by River, Tasya and the operative should be quite interesting.

Simon's reaction was spot on. Mal being the voice of reason was a pleasant change as he is usually the one to go off half cocked.

I look forward to Mal's dad and brothers patching things up and perhaps expanding the ranch? Or at least helping out with the spring cattle drive.

I hope Virgil's crew recovers as best they can. Maybe Kaylee can fashion a prosthetic for the other Doc (Name escapes me at the moment)

I'm eagerly awaiting more.
Friday, 06 March 2009 14:00
This was intense and wonderful and I can't wait to see what happens next. Kaylee accepting Simon and River's children is wonderful, but is bound to bring some tension to the table.
Saturday, 07 March 2009 18:06
I said it wasn't over. And insurrection? Can't wait!

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