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Retribution: Chapter 11

Wednesday, March 4, 2009

The New Haven Series; Post BDM; M/I, S/K: After the battle...

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"Nara...."

"Mal stay with me." As soon as they touched the ground, lying on the grates, she rushed over.

"Niska really worked him over." Hershel told her as he hung from the chain. "Keys are in his pocket."

Inara didn't question why his father was there as she rushed over and searched the body for the keys. Finding them, she went back to Mal and Zoe and unchained them.

"Whole lotta hurt went on in here." Jayne noted as he lumbered in. "Sorry it took so long, had to go back and clean up the mess Moonbrain left on accounta she didn't wanna kill no one."

"I don't need a progress report, get everyone out." She threw him the keys as River walked in. "River..."

"On my way." River went over and opened the cargo bay door, heading off to fetch her brother.

As the others went about their orders, Inara helped Zoe to her feet, and leaned over Mal.

"That's... whole lotta blood...." He said as he lifted up a hand to touch her, but saw the palm and fingers a thick crimson red. "Huh."

"Simon's going to treat you as soon as he gets here." She reassured, ripping the hem of her shirt and taking it to his leg as a tourniquet.

"But, Virgil.... they've been under his heel longer." The battered Reynolds swallowed thickly as the piece of fabric was lashed tight on his leg. "Somone's missin' a leg... 'smorethana.... few toes..." He winced as she helped him elevate his foot. "Meilin.... what..."

"She's fine, she's with Kaylee and Shan-shan..."

"Good... be some... terriblepain... if someone... hurt....." He met her eyes and smiled. "You sure are purty."

"Don't 'ave toloseblood... figur that out," Virgil slurred as Jayne helped him.

"Virgil.... shuddup..."

"Alright, we're here." Simon announced as he and the woman few knew came in with a stretcher. They quickly set it down as he turned to Jayne. "Jayne I need you and someone else to man the stretcher,"

"On it doc." He picked up one side as Hershel, who had been freed came over and picked up the other side. The merc looked at the older gentle

Comments
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 13:15
I loved Mal's conversation (albeit one sided) with Shan-Shan, and her taking up a lot of the bed. And the image of Mal lying with Meilin on his chest is just so sweet. Now, I know this isn't over yet, but at least their hurts have been patched, and they have something of a respite.
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 13:27
Awesome, I loved the Zoe/Tasya interation, your Zoe was perfect.
And the Mal/Shan-Shan was great, really reminded me of my dog.
But the contagious yawning was too cute for words.
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 15:16
Great chapter, love the direction you've gone with all these characters creating strength and resolve.

And it looks like Zoe has found a friend:)
XARLEM
Wednesday, 04 March 2009 16:08
I freaking love Shan-shan! Oh, and the rest of the chapter was awesome too LOL. I'm kinda sad that it seems to be winding down.

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