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A Day of Prayer (Part Two)

Wednesday, November 27, 2002

Simon finds himself in the middle of a murder plot, unfortunatly, nobody knows but River.

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God, I pray also for our first mate, Zoe, and pilot Wash. I praise you for them individually and as a couple. I thank you for endowing Zoe with the greatest of all virtues, Loyalty, as well as courage and strength. And Wash, I thank you for giving him a sense of humor, a child-like outlook. They are a blessing to the ship, the backbone and the funnybone, the strength and the heart. Lord, please bless them, keep Zoe out of harms way, keep Wash’s skills quick and sure. But most of all Lord, I pray, bless their marriage. Let it be an inspiration to all who look upon it in this time of trial and uncertainty. Love, no matter it’s form, glorifies you, the Lord of Love, so I praise you for their love, and I pray their love may increase, as your love increases towards your bride, the church.

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“She’s not a racer, but she’s dependable,” Mal said. “An’ she ain’t never failed to do a job. Now, to Flagstone would take about two weeks, give or take a day.”

“Why give or take?” Michele “Puffer” Newvack said, taking a deep drag of his cigarette. “Why not exactly?”

“I just ain’t sure ‘bout asteroids, other ships, that sort of thing. No reason to suspect we’d get there in any more’in Fourteen days.” Mal said, realizing that he’d never seen a man with more yellowed teeth. “That a problem?”

“No,” Newvack said, shaking his head. “Seems reasonable. Now, you know, tobacco is outlawed on Flagstone.” He let out a long puff of curling white smoke. “Say it’s bad for the health.”

“Do they?” Mal said, forcing himself not to cough.

“Yeah, that won’t be a problem, will it?”

“Why should it be?”

“Jus’ if you were to get boarded by customs at Flagstone you might have a hard time explaining yourself.”

“For starters,” Mal said very clearly, “There ain’t no call to insult my crew by insinuating we might get caught with our proverbial pants down by some customs officers. We’ve had valuable cargo before an’ been boarded by an official Alliance raiding party in cold space. They looked everywhere for it, even under the gorramn pla

Comments
Thursday, 28 November 2002 17:02
very very good. perfect really.

I really hope there's more where that came from.

maybe some Kaylee/Simon? packed in a story with all the rest of them of course. you describe them perfectly. my little qualms with Mal being too grumpy (I posted that about part 1) are well taken care of in part 2. he's just right now.

thanks for writing this and sharing it.

Idefix
Thursday, 05 December 2002 20:58
This is really nice. I hope you keep writing!!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 December 2002 14:21
Wow I'm late. Shoulda read this a long time ago. Good stuff, good stuff. Love the characterizations.

But is it just me or did ol' Book forget to pray for everyone's favorite mechanic? I'm running on no sleep for two days straight, so I may have missed it, wouldn't be suprised if I had, but I figured I'd ask.
Monday, 23 December 2002 14:25
Ok that last one was me. My lack of sleep made me forget to log in, sorry.
Wednesday, 08 January 2003 06:10
OK, i gave the first half a 9, id give this one an 11 if i could. DO you accept bribes? Seriously, unknown_poltroonspignore@am-yaho.com. if you cant figure out the e-mail between that and my username, well then the hell with it. Seriously, i gots paypal. Keep writing damnit. Its rare that i can find a fanfic tha gives me something that dosent diverge form the orginal feeling of the story. If there is any other form of encouragemment i can give you, damnit, let me know. If youre over 18 and female, i can offer sexual favors for more stories, other than that, small amounts of cash are a all i can give. Damnit, i read both of them and want more!!!!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 20 August 2003 19:57
I used to be a teacher and very rarely rate anything as perfect, however things do change. I must find more of your writings. OK so he didn't pray for Kaylee, But I'm getting over that. Man what a story I've beeen working on it for a few days. I really love it. Want more!!!
Wednesday, 20 August 2003 19:57
ugh, It didn't post my name. That was me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 28 August 2003 14:44
ha! I loved it!!!

~Tam's Girl
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 May 2005 14:32
I absolutely love the story, my favorite one out there. i actually read the epilogue first (oops) and then spent like a whole day looking for it so i could read it again and finally found it and read these! Anyway, time to stop rambling, amazingly written!

YAY!
SAVORYD
Tuesday, 11 July 2006 20:03
Excellent work! I'm a fanfic addict - usually for Star Trek, more recently for Firefly (thank you Netflix). Your story execution and character treatments are first rate. This felt just like an episode. I look forward to reading more of your fanfics.
~SavoryD

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