Found
Monday, February 9, 2004
The fall out when Two by Two catch up with Simon and River
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4897
RATING: 9.0 (PG13)
SERIES: FIREFLY
I wrote this an eon ago for a Fan zine that never got off the ground, hence the shortness. Please don't ask for prequels or sequels – ‘cause the muse for this story fluttered away a long time ago. Thanks!
FOUND*
Simon was fading, all but dead, and River knew she couldn’t resurrect him. The body was still breathing, the heart was still beating, but his mind, the part of him that made him Simon, and not somebody else, was being taken; ripped out of him by blue hands that didn’t mind the fact their violence had left a mess. Like sister like brother.
“I believe,” the shorter of the two blue-handed men said. “That he’s told us everything he knows.”
The taller blue-handed man nodded and flipped the small, leather bound notebook closed. River watched, through tear soaked eyes, as the taller blue-handed man slid the notebook into his suit’s breast pocket. They used a notebook because transmitting what Simon had told them would be dangerous. Hackers can cut through even the most secure lines and steal the secrets Simon knew. Important secrets like how he had dreams about Kaylee and how he wished Mal would teach him how to fire a gun and how, sometimes, late at night, he said a prayer even though he didn’t really believe in God. There were other secrets too; less important ones about how much he’d paid the men who’d stolen River and the address of the warehouse on Persephone where he’d retrieved her. All the secrets were safe inside that notebook. Nobody would know them who wasn’t supposed to.
The shorter blue-handed man walked up to the small table beside Simon’s chair that held all the needles. There had been lots of needles, River thought. Simon’s forearms were already covered with grayish purple bruises. But then, the blue-hands had always liked needles. They’d used needles to rip River apart, back at the academy, to kill her just like they were killing Simon right now. He’d saved her, of course, because he was brave and good. River wanted to be brave and good, too. She wished with all of
INNOGEN
Monday, 09 February 2004 18:11
Interesting story. The Tams get caught and actually survive to be rescued! You provide a very logical reason why they really can't leave Serenity unless they have an iron clad safe place to go.
Innogen
Monday, 09 February 2004 18:11
This was absolutely gorram brilliant! I loved every line and it had so very much crammed in it that to add more would have been to spoil it. I am so glad that River got those *wangba dans* and killed them, it was so fitting. The ending though was perfect with Mal handing the book to Simon. Symbolically giving him control back over his own life but never *ever* abandoning him (or River). Wonderful, words are too small to give adequate thanks. *Xiexie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 09 February 2004 22:21
Harriet
Where have you been? That was brilliant as always. Thanks so much.
GS
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 09:38
So glad to see your work again.
Thank you so much.
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 17:35
SO HAPPY TO BE READING YOU AGAIN. YOU HAVE BEEN SORELY MISSED!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 20:39
Harry V ...you rock...and are one of the reasons why we keep the faith :) Welcome Back !!
Saturday, 14 February 2004 02:47
Simon was always my favorite, and I thought you captured his character, and everyone elses, quite well. Keep writing, please.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 15 February 2004 19:16
So good to be reading you again. Welcome back.
KAYLEE19
Sunday, 15 February 2004 19:19
I love this. You did such a good job with Simon, you have a really good feel for his character. It's great to be reading something of your again
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 18 February 2004 07:25
Very nice, I especially enjoyed the nonsense/metaphoric lucidity you wrote for River. It would be so easy for your to just write her some gibberish.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 April 2004 14:55
I love this, as I've loved all your stories in the past two weeks since I discovered this web site. No pressure, but I would LOVE to see more. Much more. Is there more someplace? I thought I remembered seeing a website somewhere on one of the earlier stories, but now I can't find it. Anyway, keep writing--your characterizations tend to be right on, and your plots are well thought out and very entertaining. :-)
Friday, 29 April 2005 23:48
Great, great work. The opening scene was bonechillingly fabulous. I've really enjoyed reading all of your fic over the past couple of months, and am sad to see that this seems to be where it ends. If you ever do happen to post anything else, you can bet I'll be back to read! Cheers!! :)
Monday, 23 January 2006 19:54
Wow, that was ecellent! I'm a huge fan of your stories and of Simon (and Kaylee). This was wonderful. Did you write a sequel to this?
Strangely, I'm working on a story where Simon is captured by the Feds. Hopefully, it won't sound too similar to this one!
Friday, 24 November 2006 05:59
thanks for the great read
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