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Spinning Out-Chapter 06: "The Deep End (part 2/2)"

Thursday, May 15, 2008

The conclusion of Spinning Out. Picks up after part one of the same chapter. Simon, Kaylee, River, and Jayne travel to the other side of Persephone to have some fun of their own. After Badger pays Mal and before anybody is under the impression their luck is changing, an old acquaintence throws them into the middle of the maelstrom. Samuel Ling recieves an unwanted guest in his Parliament office.

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Continued from Part Two of Chapter 6: The Deep End

On the other side of the planet, in a small but glitzy city named Semele, in a well populated bar called “Empty Promises”, River held a silver coin just under her eye, “Shoot.”

Across the stand up table was a large merchant spacer hanging on for life. He held his coin up and blinked at the double image of the shot glass in between them. The table had gathered a small audience. This little girl had taken out three other pacers from the same company. The spacer took a deep breath then flicked the coin at the table. The coin bounced off the table and barely missed the glass. The crowd around them laughed.

“That was so close,” said River. “I was scared there.” She flicked her coin at the table but missed. The crowd became excited. Would this end the girl’s unprecedented winning streak?

“I got you now, girly,” said the spacer. He braced himself on the table and took his shot. Another miss. “It’s okay. It’s okay. She ain’t got no luck left.”

River weaved her coin in between her fingers a few times then held it up for the crowd to see, “Double bounce.”

Tsway-niou ,” said the spacer.

River released the coin. It bounced once on River’s side. It f

Comments
Thursday, 15 May 2008 14:18
what is it with the verse and its aptly named bars??

enjoyed samuel's dialogue a lot.

fine conclusion:)
XYNK
Friday, 16 May 2008 05:55
Very interesting very readable, i see where your going with another civil war. i like the idea alot. there's alot of questions to ask like will mal join or not. but he brings up a good point they would be fighting for a new alliance he fought for independance. evil we know vs evil we don't know.
Saturday, 31 May 2008 00:23
Thank you as always wytchcroft.

Xynk... thanks for reading. But I wouldn't be so sure that there is another civil war brewing. 1) I try to treat Joss's creations with the right amount of respect and in the 'Verse, Unification was complete and utterly spirit breaking for the Independents. 2) On any particular plot point I may have two or three possible outcomes. When a commenter identifies one I mark it off the list :)! Keeps'em on their toes.

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