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Walking the Nightmare Softly

Saturday, May 3, 2008

part eighteen...thanks to the readers, my advice givers, and for Werzbowski for the loan on such a great character, hope I'm doing him justice....
Cat starts to dance.....

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Walking the Nightmare Softly

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based on the world of Firefly by Joss Whedon

She took her first step into the hallway, her left hand shaking a bit as she stifled it. Cat knew this hallway far too well. They had made them run it over and over again, a drill to see if they could negotiate a maze even in pain. A glint caught her eye as she bent to pick up a piece of glass from within the far corner. It had escaped the sweepers and had probably driven them crazy until finally programming won out and they learned to ignore it. Was it just her or could she see blood still on its edges? After a few seconds, she did a peculiar thing, Cat took the shard and placed it in her pocket before venturing farther into her own personal nightmare.

Scratches seemed to be on every door jam and across every wall. Blood cleaned from the metal, though naked to the normal eye, shown like new fallen snow on black pavement to her genetically enhanced eyes.

“What do you see?” 'Ski asked, trusting his partner's senses above his own.

“Fear.” She commented back, her emerald eyes glowing like a cat's at night. One word to describe the way they had felt, as their blood mixed together on the floor, the walls, everywhere. Light at the end of the hallway caused her sensitive eyes to hurt and as they emerged into the brightly lit room, 'Ski cussed.

Monitors of every shape and size covered the walls, the room oval and flashing images that would horrify most. 'Ski let out a low whistle before commenting. “Fuck me blind before I die, I thought the Reavers were bad.”

“Reavers got an excuse. These don't.” Cat took in each room as she watched the torture begin and end with young ones and ones her age. A single monitor, though caught her attention. “They're alive.”

Mal and his crew stood bold on the front screen, his shoulder bandaged as was the right leg of Jayne, the only other one Kaylee had mentioned being shot. Zoe paced against the far wall, normal for her. If Cat remembe

Comments
Saturday, 03 May 2008 21:16
Loved this but wish you would write longer chapters, they end just as I get into them. Mighty frustrating but great story. Can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
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Sunday, 04 May 2008 00:22
very exciting. I'm ready for the next installment.
Sunday, 04 May 2008 12:16
Fantastic opening description of the Academy - I particularly like the 'new fallen snow on black pavement' image of the cleaned blood still showing to Cat. And the body part following them into the hall after the explosion ... Now, on to the rescue!
Tuesday, 06 May 2008 00:24
Glad River's okay. She just loves to make up smart-ass names for the men she meets though, doesn't she? The Machine, pwned....nice touch. I always like to see the bad guys get their pi-gu totally whupped once in a blue (which you will see up close if you stick with TOTIS, which I am very grateful you're sticking with! :D).

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