Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Bouncing Ball Ch 14

Friday, December 10, 2010

Jane and I are just doing what we like so enjoy the ride... big THANKS to Ali and 'Ski who have read and commented every time. You all rock! Anyway... Cat meets Badger...

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Chapter 14

Mal was not having a good day. It was still raining, his headache didn't seem to want to go, no matter what little pills or potions Simon saw fit to give him or inject him with, and now here he was, standing in a jail, facing his wife through the bars. The fact that it was normally the other way around, with him in the cell, didn't make him feel any better.

She got up slowly from the cot, still as trim as ever, no sign of any pregnancy ... except perhaps for a slight green tinge to her skin. He wasn't surprised - the air in the basement wasn't the freshest, and the men all packed into the other cell had made it a lot worse. Besides, Frey always had been prone to morning sickness.

"Mal."

"Frey."

She took hold of the bars. "Mal, I -"

"You wanna tell me what that was all about?"

"It was just a fight," Cat said, standing up.

"I wasn't talking to you."

"Tough. I was talking to you. It was a fight. That's it."

"You let my pregnant wife walk into a place like that -"

"I'm not sick, Mal," Freya interrupted.

This time he turned on her. "Don't you want this kid?"

"Of course I do!"

"Then how come half the gorram ship knows before I did?"

"That's an exaggeration -"

"Is it? You told Cat, River knows ... who the hell else did you go flapping your mouth at?"

"Mal, stop."

"No, Frey. Not this time. I know there's stuff you haven't told me, and I understand that, but ... you're pregnant. Don't you think I deserved to know?"

Her grip on the bars whitened her knuckles. "Damn it, will you let me finish!"

His eyebrows raised. "Fine. Go ahead."

"I was going to tell you. Then ... things happened."

Mal glanced at Cat. "I conjure I know what they were. But that doesn't give you a reason to keep something like this from me."

Cat leaned on the bars and sighed. "You're a prick."

"You're defending her?"

"She's your wife."

"And I shouldn't have had to hear about being a father again 'cause you were both in a f

Comments
Friday, 10 December 2010 18:56
This really is so good.

I love the tension built from Cat knowing so much OF Mal, and ABOUT Mal, but she doesnt know this version, such rich storytelling.

I should comment on more of these, but I run out of ways of saying "This is great, can't wait to read more"
Friday, 10 December 2010 21:42
It's true what they say... this is what happens when you call the Feds.

I love it when it gets all action-y!

- 'Ski
Saturday, 11 December 2010 02:04
Wow, loved seeing the other version of Badger and seeing that he is just as big a Rat as the old one! I'm glad that Mal seems to be softening a little towards Frey and can't wait to see how they get out of this. Plenty of excitement building and I was amused at Badger having a nip and tuck to keep his oily good looks. LOL. Shiny as ever, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 15 December 2010 20:44
Haven't been here for a while and still catching up. Have I said that I love your stories? Love the tension!

Keep it going!

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