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Heart transplant

Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Part fifteen.....thnks to Werzbowski for the lend and to all of you who are reading....

Cat cleans up......

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Heart Transplant

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based on the world of Firefly by Joss Whedon

Kaylee worked quickly as she inspected both of the firefly catalysts before tossing the other in the pile. It slid down the stack of salvaged parts as she grabbed a few fuses as well. "Now these are hard to find, 'specially ones still workin'. Think he'll miss 'em?"

"Just stick 'em in your pocket and no one's the wiser. Besides, we're not sure Shep is gonna live much longer." Cat tossed a look back toward the shack.

"How'd you meet him anyway?" Kaylee asked, "if you don't mind me askin'?"

"I needed a pilot. He needed the money." She smiled. "He's the best there is. I've seen him drive a Excalibur class boat through an asteroid field."

"Ai ya! That's a big boat and she's got an even bigger ass." Kaylee sighed. "Well, I don't feel so worried now 'bout him taking Serenity's helm."

"Believe me, he'll take good care of her." Cat placed a hand on Kaylee's shoulder. "Got what you need?"

"You bet."

"Good, let go see if 'Ski has negotiated a..." Cat was interrupted by a shot and 'Ski emerged from the shop smiling. "Liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze duh ur-tze."

"My wife would never use that kind of language." 'Ski smiled at her.

"What the fuck?" Cat yelled back at him. "You were suppose to agree on a price, not a damn bullet to his gorran head."

"That's my baby." 'Ski was always a bit giddy after killing someone. He blamed it mostly on his past and maybe a bit on the fact he was just plain mean. "He stood on twelve thousand. I offered him a bullet in the head. He lowered it to a thousand and I realized I left all my money in my other pants. So I shot him. Easy enough and all we're out is a bullet. Come on, Babe, he was a piece of shit."

"He was just gonna rob some other idiot blind." Kaylee came to 'Ski's defense, even though she wasn't quite sure why.

Cat shook her head and then gave up. It was pointless being mad at 'Ski. She should have known better than to leave h

Comments
Wednesday, 30 April 2008 20:19
Really good and I liked the true reason Ski killed that cheating scrapshop owner better than the one he gave first time round. I surely hope our BDMs are rescued while there is still enough life left in them to recover. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 30 April 2008 21:00
the first reason made me LOL.
Wednesday, 30 April 2008 21:12
Been gone a few days and Holy Smoly did I have some catching up to do. Excellent writing Angelle. Glad that you’ve added Ski into the mix, interesting character. The chapters are moving along quite smoothly and you’ve really beefed (bloodied) up the action…..SWEET!

Sweet Lil Kaylee taking someone’s life? Guess having visions of Jubal Early could help in that decision…lol.

Your character interactions are spot on and borrowing a character from another browncoat ( Werzbowski,with permission of course) is way cool. After all we are family here aren’t we, well maybe not like Pete and his niece (chuckle) but you….well you know what I mean.

Anyhoo, I’m enjoying the story. Looking forward to more.

Z

PS: Adding more detail as Steamer has suggested really added to the visual. I could almost feel myself in the old scrap yard smelling the greasy parts.
Thursday, 01 May 2008 07:40
I like Cat. She really grows on you, and even 'Ski is a revelation. Unrequited affection there or what? Just a little bit queasy at the sound of the dog licking the blood from his owner's head, but I'll get over it! As for the rest ... keep writing!
Thursday, 01 May 2008 11:25
Goooooooooooood. Some nice insight into Cat and 'Ski throughout the chapter. As has been stated, it's very cool that 'Ski gave an initial reason for killing Shep and then tossed out the real reason later on. Gives us a little idea what sort of a man he really is. I may have missed this before, but are they just posing as a married couple or were they really hitched awhile back?

And, need I add, you're doing right well posting one chapter a day and keeping up a good pace with a good fic. ;)

Incidentally, if you want to create some more Chinese phrases/curses/insults, I use the Chinese-English dictionary at http://www.mdbg.net. A couple of quick word searches and you can toss a nice little diatribe together and leave readers scratching their heads wondering, How'd she do it? ;)

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