Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
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Monday, 17 March 2008 20:20
I absolutely ADORED this. Definitely could see Jayne wanting more power and I just hope for his sake that nothing'll happen to the crew - especially Inara while Mal is away or he'll be in biiiiig trouble :)

Why did Mal have to go on *that* job on *that* day? *frowns* I think they're missing each other already, poor lovebirds...Looking forward to the next chapter - ok I'm officially hooked but It's all your fault guys!

Keep flying ;)
Monday, 17 March 2008 21:52
Adored this. So lovely seeing Mal and Inara so comfortable together and not shy to show their feelings at long last. I'm feeling all manner of nervous about the job on Verbena but River hasn't made any worrying pronoucements so mayhap they'll at least survive the next chapter. Gorram hope so! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 18 March 2008 03:24
I smell angst and plot development ahead. And feindish plans to draw this out till they're both taut as bowstrings. Loved the Zoe touches to solidify her and Mal's relationship. A lot of wonderful insight into the personality of the crew - especially Jayne. You go guys! This was great!
Tuesday, 18 March 2008 08:51
Good beginning. There would be times Serenity was close to the edge of not running, and when Mal was forced to take any job he could. But the goodbye to Inara was sweetness itself.
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 12:50
you write with genuine tenderness. i'm impressed:)
Tuesday, 15 April 2008 15:32
Hullo you two
Can't remember if I commented on this portion elsewhere, but I really do love it. The interaction between everybody is perfect, the dialog sparkling. And so very sweet, all the way up to "what she said".

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