Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA
The Slower Path: The One Less Traveled By - Part 14 - Sequel to Regrets
Saturday, October 31, 2015
They fell silent again, struggling to find the ease that they had found, before; before the argument that had almost ended things.
"I feel like-," she started.
"This is-," he said at the same time.
They looked at each other. "Awkward," they both said, laughing lightly.
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BYTEMITE
Tuesday, 10 November 2015 05:30
Yay! Glad to see more of this. Things seem to be slowly moving forwards a bit, but it's like a dance with them, sometimes steps forward, sometimes to the side, sometimes backwards.
Zoe and Kaylee continue to be good confidants, both of them inwardly shaking their heads at their hesitation. And Jayne is as Jayne-like as ever with his hopes for the companion house. Who knows, maybe one of the girls there will surprise us all, and raise serious questions about taste.
(Don't worry much about how long it's taken for you to get any notes here, things aren't as busy as they once were, though some of us check back now and then.)
Zoe and Kaylee continue to be good confidants, both of them inwardly shaking their heads at their hesitation. And Jayne is as Jayne-like as ever with his hopes for the companion house. Who knows, maybe one of the girls there will surprise us all, and raise serious questions about taste.
(Don't worry much about how long it's taken for you to get any notes here, things aren't as busy as they once were, though some of us check back now and then.)
Tuesday, 10 November 2015 06:55
Hey! Thanks for coming by :) I do appreciate the note, but yeah, I know there's not a lot of the old M/I crowd around here anymore. I'm just writing for myself these days, there's story that wants to come out, so as long as it still wants to come I'm gonna write it.
They are moving forward, still slow, I know *G* it's the theme, darlin' ;) There will be more movement soon though, I promise - I can't keep them this way forever ;) Unless of course they end up in another fight and call it quits... you never can tell with those two ;)
All kidding aside though, I'm glad you like Zoe and Kaylee as confidants. I know Zoe's been talking to Mal alot more than usual, but I figure she's got to sometimes, and also, now that she doesn't have Wash to talk to, she may need someone; you get used to that kind of talking, might not be so easy to go without it again *shrug* And Kaylee, she's a little older, a little wiser, and is in the middle of her own 'happily ever after', and it's really fun to me for her to be giving Inara relationship advice :)
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I've already got a few thousand words written of the next part, though I'm reworking it a bit - because they are so gorram tetchy and prickly all they want to do is fight, the fools... Ah, I love them so :)
They are moving forward, still slow, I know *G* it's the theme, darlin' ;) There will be more movement soon though, I promise - I can't keep them this way forever ;) Unless of course they end up in another fight and call it quits... you never can tell with those two ;)
All kidding aside though, I'm glad you like Zoe and Kaylee as confidants. I know Zoe's been talking to Mal alot more than usual, but I figure she's got to sometimes, and also, now that she doesn't have Wash to talk to, she may need someone; you get used to that kind of talking, might not be so easy to go without it again *shrug* And Kaylee, she's a little older, a little wiser, and is in the middle of her own 'happily ever after', and it's really fun to me for her to be giving Inara relationship advice :)
Anyway, I've rambled on long enough. I've already got a few thousand words written of the next part, though I'm reworking it a bit - because they are so gorram tetchy and prickly all they want to do is fight, the fools... Ah, I love them so :)
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