Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
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Monday, 10 March 2008 04:15
It's amazing where a little snow cream will lead you.

Monday, 10 March 2008 07:18
I find my self wanting snow cream...
Monday, 10 March 2008 10:13
where to start? this is precisely the subtle interplay based on deep 'romantic' feeling that is extremely hard to write (leastways for myself!)...
congrats 2x2 you done good - no haste but no waste and finely done, almost musical.
Monday, 10 March 2008 11:05
Is it wrong that I want Kaylee to join Simon going out the airlock? Always with the interrupting just as we get to the good parts. I knew you would have someone interrupt Mal and Inara, it was just going too perfectly and beautifully smooth. Not sure the slower path isn't going to end up killing them both though. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 10 March 2008 19:03
Wow. Just wow. When these two decide to get up to speed they're going to combust! Very much enjoyed the back and forth introspection and most especially the insight into why Mal had to keep his distance from Inara by insulting her. Mal averting his eyes was so in character I had to laugh. This was wonderfully descriptive to the smallest nuance. Drag it out as long as you want!
Monday, 10 March 2008 19:45
I love it. This is how I expect their relationship to evolve.
keep 'em coming, please.
Peace,
SBar
Monday, 10 March 2008 22:33
*sigh*

Beautiful job! So slow and sweet. I love this. Poor Simon. He just keeps endearing himself to Mal. :D
Monday, 10 March 2008 23:26
This elegantly captures their more subtle interplay, which I imagine is very difficult to write.

A 10+
Tuesday, 11 March 2008 13:48
Trouble is, slow can slow right down to a stop. I think someone needs to take them in hand. But it's beautifully done, all the same!

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