Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
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Wednesday, 05 March 2008 01:47
This was lovely. Never heard of snow cream before but sounds like fun. So nice to see everyone in a fine old mood. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 03:39
Loved the graphic touch of the recipe at the beginning. Really enjoyed the personal observations of the crew's interactions throughout. Having Mal stand in Simon's way was so typical Mal and River knowing what games were being played in people's heads was adorable!
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 08:44
Very nice. A happy interaction scene, and River's right - filling the holes with new memories.
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 10:08
Damn I am enthralled. It just gets better.A happy time for our BDH's
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 15:52
Really enjoying this series of glimpses of Inara and Mal and the rest of the crew in a sunny mood. Love the idea of Inara getting out of her posh frocks and into something totally different. Simon's reaction to the ice cream making (and Kaylee's retort) is perfect:
'Simon peered into the foot tub, a frown starting between his eyes. “Is it really sanitary to eat snow?” he asked no one in particular.
“Well, ya gotta scoop around the yellow parts,” Kaylee teased him with a grin and a wink.'

LOL!
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 17:57
Your fault I'm addicted to this guys, not mine! I could picture Mal swollowing when he saw her and I really liked seeing the crew cooking, it just makes them look like family *smiles* Though I can't wait for Mal and Inara to have a moment together, I'm real curious on what Mal will tell her once he could talk to her personally :>

Keep flying ;)
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 19:35
Enthralling... I could picture everything. It all seemed so like everyone too. I was really into the part of Inara wearing different stuff but a little description there would have been nice. Over all a great write.
Friday, 07 March 2008 10:37
this was great!:) Been trying to pick a fave passage but couldn't - i will say though that you judge the dialog very well - the small movements of the talking characters break up the chat nicely. doesn't feel forced (as i said before).

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