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The Slower Path: Long Day - Part 2 - Sequel to Favourite Things

Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Inara returns Mal's coat.

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The Slower Path:

Sequel to

by and

Rating: PG

Pairing: Mal/Inara

Spoilers: Set post BDM

Word Count: 1069

Summary: Inara returns Mal's coat.

Author's Note: As requested, a sequel to Favourite Things, the first of hopefully many! We're making this a series now, called The Slower Path. Thanks for reading, and hope you enjoy.

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She’d woken late that morning, later than she’d meant to, and the sounds of an active crew could already be heard through out the ship as she exited her shuttle, Mal’s coat folded over her arms neatly. She hesitated on the catwalk, and then took the back stairs up to the front hallway, avoiding the mess. She wasn’t sure she wanted to create a spectacle out of returning the coat, certain that there would be speculation amongst the crew soon enough.

She turned down the hall to the crew quarters, glancing over her shoulder into the mess where she could see Kaylee, River and Simon talking animatedly over breakfast, and she smiled softly, before making her way quietly to Mal’s bunk. The hatch was closed, and she was on the verge of knocking when she heard Zoe and Mal’s voices coming down from the bridge. She turned towards them hesitantly as they came down the stairs into the hall, Zoe’s eyes quickly taking note of what she held, and then the first mate gave a brief nod and continued on to the kitchen, leaving her and Mal alone.

Comments
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 04:25
Glad those two are taking things slow. Maybe it'll mean more fics?
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 08:37
This is sweet. The dancing about has become a slow waltz, and maybe there'll be a tango to come ...
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 09:49
You know the pace of their courting is *exactly* how I could see it happening if it ever did in the series. Not only is it more affecting it gives each of them time to acclimatise to one another and be sure that this is the direction they want to take. It feels so very in character for them. And trust Jayne to interrupt the moment (grin). I loved Inara telling Mal she was partial to brown. No, really? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 13:03
Yeah! More 2X2 and anjulie! You two write some fabulous stuff together! Really looking forward to this series - it's what the world needs now, positivity, creativity and more Mal/Inara!
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 18:47
I sure hope this means more fics ncbrowncoat, especially from two great writers like 2x2 and anjulie!! I'm really looking forward to the next part 'cause this was brilliant!!! Me want more =>

Keep flying ;)
Wednesday, 27 February 2008 05:38
What excitement bubbling! I loved their hands staying together, and Jayne's interruption. And Mal's trying to play it cool back with the others. It's great that everyone is in on it - t'wouldn't be near as much fun without all the blushing!

I'm looking forward to you guys dragging this out for a long time yet to come...
Wednesday, 27 February 2008 17:47
This fic made me squee and grin.

A series!?! Woohoo! That's an excellent idea. You two are very smart!

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