Word Sense
Thursday, June 12, 2003
Simon and Kaylee's first 'encounter.' 'Nuff said.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4098
RATING: 8.0 (NC17)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Disclaimer: Firefly isn't mine. Neither are the characters. I make no money. Etc, etc, etc. Sue me and you get nothing. Sorry. -_-
For Kaythryn.
Simon had thought that sex was an art. Terms like rutting or humping were gratuitous, uncivilized ways of expressing the actions involved. Making love - that's what Simon had always called it, what it had always been. But then he'd met Kaylee.
It was still making love, but the art was gone - replaced with instinct. They humped like crazy all over the ship, but mostly in the engine room. She loved the engine room. He smiled to himself as he thought of that, thought of the way her voice rose in pitch as she called his name; the sound of the fission reactor made sure no one else ever heard that, made sure that she was his and only his.
He might not have been able to adjust to Kaylee's style of sex, otherwise.
They never did anything anywhere else on board Serenity if all the crew was accounted for. Too much risk for even Kaylee's taste, and neither of them were ready to share their relationship with the others. Only River knew, and she hadn't been told, hadn't seen. She'd simply known, which hadn't really bothered Simon very much. Kaylee and River liked one another - they were innocent together.
The sound of Simon's laughter careened off the walls of the infirmary. Innocent and Kaylee were two words that should no longer be placed together in his mind. She'd left her innocence firmly behind her when she'd come to him the last time they were on Persephone, brown eyes glittering with mischief and want. He'd been so utterly unprepared for her then, so totally immersed in his ideas of sex and love. Chivalry and honor had been his sustaining traits out in the Black, and he found them lacking when put to the test.
He'd tried to be gentle, to go slowly, but she'd pushed him back against the cabinets of the small kitchen and fumbled with his pants. Her tongue had been hot against his
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 June 2003 04:13
BC
That poor boy. Kaylee has really gotten into his blood and good for him.
Good thing that they do it in the engine room if she makes that much noise. That would bring everybody.
Thursday, 12 June 2003 05:01
Oh man--there are no words in this 'verse for how much I adore this story. I mean that sincerely. WOW.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 12 June 2003 13:39
The story,given it's subject,followed itself well. The characterization of Simon's shift in the words that he'd use to describe 'making love' I don't follow. Simon as I've always taken him,being from the core and caring for his sister,has always been as a man with a purpose and with a romantic sense. I think that Simon is a noble minded character and I just can't seem to wrap my mind around his new found understanding of rutting and humping and the use of these words.
Thursday, 12 June 2003 16:59
Whoo hoo! Thank you a million times over Pop, I love my smut! This is really very, very good and I hope I can beg you to write more in the future... and if begging doesn't work, I’ll try blackmail :)
Wednesday, 18 June 2003 17:34
um...is it warm in here?
:D damn fine work.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 July 2004 20:06
YAY!!! I like this very much indeed. I agree with the comment above in the sense that I don't ever see Simon utterly comfortable with "rutting" etc but I love the idea that hes forced to look past his preconceptions. I think the pace of your narrative completely matches the sense that he's overwhelmed by her. Thats the essence of their special relationship to me. So more please...
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 August 2004 01:10
Ahhhhhh! Sweet heavenly god that was an awesome piece of Kaylee/Simon rutting humping lovemaking. No negatives from me, no siree-bub. "His pants were tight and undone and her hands were roaming across his chest and back and he had no idea what to do." Wooo, baby that's nice! Thank you for this. I'll be back to re-read it, I know. Keep it coming so I can do the same. :0)
-Roving Eye
Wednesday, 26 January 2005 04:49
Wow...I need to take a cold shower now.
LOVED THE STORY!!!!!
Monday, 17 October 2005 06:16
I don't go to a 10 gently. I only go there hot-blooded and freakin' stunned at the genius of a tale and this be it. "Watch me." Her voice was soft and rough with need. "Watch what you do to me." And he did, he watched as his final thrust sent her over the edge... Sweet Budha, but I'm in love with the way you wrote this. Her legs wrapped around him, her heels on his ass, I'm getting all het up just thinking on it. Thankee, sai. Give us more, lest we waste away.
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