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Strawberry Road, Chapter I

Sunday, June 1, 2003

An edgier look at the crew of the Serenity, focusing on the progression of Kaylee. Sometimes, events just build to a breaking point...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3184    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author’s Notes:

I wish to give everyone fair warning, the view of the Firefly ‘verse I’m taking with this fic is decidedly darker than what’s been presented on the show (save, perhaps, for the episodes “Bushwhacked” and “Objects in Space”). The characters may seem to you to be different, although I pray not entirely so. Certainly, there will be those (Dutch, in particular *G*) who will dislike where I take various people and what I do with them. Just don’t say I didn’t tell you so.

Also, you may notice a distinct lack of Chinese in this fic. I do this because I’ve been involved in other fandoms (as a reader, only) where Japanese is used heavily in stories. If you don’t know what’s being said, or how to pronounce it, the appeal of the language is lost. I find that no integrity is tossed to the wayside by using phrases such as, “Wash cursed vigorously in Mandarin.” We’ve all seen the show, and we all know what it sounds like. I’m sure almost everyone can fill in the gaps. :]

The Firefly universe is largely incomplete. Certain questions remain unanswered, and as such I’ve taken the liberty of filling in the gaps that I want to discuss with my own assumptions. I’m not, in any way, in the ‘know’ about anything ‘according to Joss.’ Don’t take my word as the end all be all on certain things, please.

Thanks to HotForKaylee for Beta reading.

And, lastly, feedback is welcome, scathing or otherwise.

Strawberry Road, Chapter I

The transmission was garbled enough that Wash had to work hours to get as much as he did, which he was quite ready to admit wasn't much at all. The image on the screen presented a worn and tired man, one who might have been very rich if tragedy hadn't struck him down. His eyes were sunken and his hair unkempt. A greenish tinge reached around his face, smothering him in ill pallor. Wash was tempted to tell Mal he couldn't salvage anything from the distress call.

"What've you got for me?" Speak of the devil, Wash thought to himself. Or would that be think of the

Comments
Sunday, 01 June 2003 08:43
My opinion doesn't really count since I did the beta reading, but, I know I've told you this before, you are a damn fine writer and I can't wait for more. The Wash and Zoe interaction is right on and I can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work! (and make sure I get to read 'em first, hehehe)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 01 June 2003 16:25
You've got ME hooked. Want more! Write on, McDuff. :)
Sunday, 01 June 2003 16:30
Satyr, this is great! HFK already said my favorite part-- "The Wash and Zoe interaction is right on". So I'm just gonna give a big ditto to him. It was perfect. Also can't wait to see what's wrong with, or what's happened to the ship. I do feel bad for poor kaylee's hair though.
Tuesday, 03 June 2003 22:19
Very excellent Wash and Zoe, yes.

I'm a little bit confused about the exact nature of Kaylee's injuries and the order in which she got them. She hit her head and then got back up on the engine before she passed out?

We'll talk more about this, I'm sure.

And something should come next.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 06 August 2003 19:38
kinda confuzled about kaylee's injuries but besides that your fic is AMAZING!! can't wait for the next chapter!
JOHNNYREB
Wednesday, 10 September 2003 17:55
Great work. I'm not so confused about the nature of Kaylee's injuries as what Serenity hit. Was there an explosion? There seems to be an awful lot of walking wounded for a ship that just stopped working. Other than that, great work. Keep writing!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 14 August 2004 02:56
"The pilot briefly entertained the mental image of Mal as a caveman being chased by dinosaurs."

That line just cracked me up!
Wednesday, 26 January 2005 04:44
Keep up the good work!
KAYLEE19
Monday, 14 February 2005 18:01
Are you writing another chapter to this? It's really good, I can't wait to see where you're going with it.

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