Not Poaching
Sunday, June 8, 2003
Mal realizes Wash is serious about Zoe and he doesn't like it.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 5725
RATING: 9.0 (G)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Once again thanks to Archer for his light speed beta and to LJC for her advice on writing dialect.
This takes place in the early days of Serenity, before Wash and Zoe are married when the crew only numbers four.
NOT POACHING
Malcolm Reynolds, late sergeant of the Independent Army, currently master of Firefly-class deep space transport Serenity and captain of a crew of four, looked up from the ship’s ledger. He had been trying for some hours to make the numbers say something more optimistic than they currently did. He stretched his arms over his head and gave a tremendous backward arch until he could hear his back crack, then rubbed his eyes and got up to get a cup of what out of courtesy they were currently calling coffee. Looking at his watch he realized he had been at the accounts for hours. The rest of the crew must have long since hit their racks. The ship was quiet except for the ever-present hum of the engine vibrating thru the deck plates.
As he climbed the ladder from his bunk, headed for the galley he realized with some surprise that despite their dismal financial condition, he felt more content with life than he had in, well, he flat out couldn’t remember the last time he felt this much at peace. The crew was shaping up, especially since they had hired on Kaylee Frye in place of that bun tien-shung de ee-duai-ro, Bester. How had he come to be so mistaken about that fella? Well, they were better shut of him. Kaylee, now, she was a real find. Unbidden, a smile came to his lips just thinking about her. Amazing natural talent with engines, pleasant to have around, working on a small crush on him, which didn’t speak too. well of her judgment in men. But then neither did her interest in Bester which is what got her on board in the first place.
Well she wasn’t the first young recruit to develop a crush on her commander and he had plenty of experience deflecting that kind of interest until it ran its natural course. It would be a sin for a man like himself
Sunday, 08 June 2003 07:19
I already reviewed this when I saw it on Glow, but as it never hurts to get good reviews - Loved It!
Sunday, 08 June 2003 15:08
Archer and I have both agreed that you're really good at this...and that's saying something.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 June 2003 17:53
BC
I loved it. I never gave much thought to Wash but I can now see that he may have more guts than brain cells.
Good for him standing up to that mean old man.
ANNIE M
Sunday, 08 June 2003 18:30
Very nice. A lovely glimpse into what Zoe means to both these men.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 June 2003 19:49
Defender82...suffice it to say: I hunt out your stuff, I rush to find a new fic on the board with your name attached, I completely love "your" voice. These are the characters that I miss so much on Friday nights. Enough said.
Sunday, 08 June 2003 19:58
Oh, I loved this. Really. I love gutsy, compassionate Wash; I love concerned and irritable Mal; and I loved vulnerable but strong Zoe. Liked Zoe and Mal's backstory, especially liked the line where Wash explains to Mal: “Mal, you’re just not getting it”; I liked it all. Thanks!
Sunday, 08 June 2003 21:07
This is so good it makes me want to kick somebody in the face! Jesus Gawd! Have you thought of the inverse? Mal and Zoe? I'm gonna go soak my head.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 June 2003 23:46
I like it alot, you really captured the charaters here.
Monday, 09 June 2003 03:12
Thanks to everyone for their kind words. I am writing a longer story with Mal and Zoe as the central protaganoists which details how they got from the Valley to getting Sernity in the air. A lot of it may ultimately look familiar because these smaller stories keep leaking out but are part of the future for the backstory I am writing (did that make sense?)
I am about 1/3 of the way thru on the big story but I am trying not ot post it until it is completely done because I find it frustrating to wait a long time between installments and there is never any guarantee that I'll have the time (or the inspiration0 to finish it.
Yur liking the shorter stories does a lot to motivate me to finish. Thanks again
Monday, 09 June 2003 23:31
Great story! I like the Mal/Zoe history. If this ends up being what Joss had in mind it would explain a lot. Good character development.
Monday, 09 June 2003 23:31
Great story! I like the Mal/Zoe history. If this ends up being what Joss had in mind it would explain a lot. Good character development.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 19 July 2003 07:32
I love Wash. OK, that said, It's enormously satisfying to have Wash hold his own or even Lord it over Mal. I love Mal, as well, don't get me wrong, but fanfic doesn't seem to celebrate the fringe characters like this. Thank you.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 October 2003 08:56
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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 October 2003 16:13
what up people i think this web site is koo...
P.S. what you doing?
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 27 April 2004 23:01
Terrific; a very nice grasp of the voices and the interaction. I think you've got Wash pretty well nailed. :) Well done.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 30 October 2005 11:22
what can i say that hasnt already been said!? Great stuff, as someone else pointed out, you really found their voices,
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