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The Price Paid--Subdue All Things--Chapter 7

Tuesday, August 19, 2003

While Mal is learning the ropes aboard the <i>Katana Maru</i>, Zoe is headed for Shadow and a meeting with Marcus Avery.

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I apologize for the delay in posting. Unfortunately real life sometimes gets in the way. If you have begun this story have patience gentle reader, I promise to finish it. With thanks again to Archer for his Beta, and to Harri Vane for her suggestions.

7-Glossary

Chao-shang tza-jiao duh tzang-huo [Animal-fucking bastard]

Kuan-Yin [Goddess of Mercy]

zhàngfu [husband]

bu gong dai tian [will not live under the same sky (with one’s enemy)]

nî hâo mêi xiâo mèimei [ you're so beautiful baby sister]

CHAPTER SEVEN—SUBDUE ALL THINGS

IN THE PRESENT

Zoe stood in the observation lounge of the Hercules watching Shadow’s dappled form, circled by her twin moons, blossom in the view port. The last time she had seen it, Shadow had been receding, growing smaller as the troop transport strained into the Black from her gravity well. She, Mal and many of the friends they had grown up with had watched their childhoods dwindle with her. After Hera, after the camp, she’d never expected to come home again. Maybe it wasn’t really a homecoming, Rhiade was gone and Mal wasn’t here. Maybe she was only visiting the grave of her youthful idealism, but it hurt a little, whatever it was. Silently calling herself all kinds of foolish, she intentionally shook off the melancholy mood and returned to her cramped berth to prepare for planetfall.

She had been on the Hercules for a week. The ship was a midsized passenger vessel with berths for 50 passengers. They didn’t have a full complement, a few family groups but mostly Alliance bureaucrats and unaccompanied military officers either coming from or going to a new posting, with a leavening of businessmen. It had been the best Mike and Rafe could do. Not really their kind of crew but they knew the second officer and it was the only thing headed Shadow’s way in a month.

She was the only unaccompanied woman and it had aroused some notice. She had consciously decided to wear the wedding ring in hope that it w

Comments
Tuesday, 19 August 2003 15:19
Brilliant! I have waited so long for this next chapter and boy was it worth it! Hope the wait is not so long for the next part. You are building a wonderful and realistic backstory for Zoe and Mal and I treasure every word from your gifted pen. Keep going and heartfelt thanks from one more Browncoat who won't ever give up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
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Wednesday, 20 August 2003 04:56
Gimme more! Gimme gimme gimme! Loving this storyline, and really enjoy the fleshed out back story. Post post post!

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