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A Prayer For Injured Children

Saturday, August 30, 2003

Book, in a moment of silence.

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This was written because my friend Archer asked me to write for Book. Originally written for the Firefly Friday Challenge, the topic was something that occurred during or immediately after the pilot 'Serenity'.

No beta so the errors are all mine. The prayer is adapted from the Anglican Book of Common Prayer circa 1662. 535 Words.

A Prayer For Injured Children

Book stood with bowed head in the cold infirmary light, alone with two injured children. He strove to empty his mind and his heart of every vestige of anger. He was seeking the perfect stillness of spirit he had been taught to achieve in the monastery, as the prelude to approaching God as a prayerful supplicant.

‘Almighty God, and merciful Father, to whom alone belong the issues of life and of death: Look down from Heaven, we humbly beseech thee, with the eyes of mercy Upon these children, now lying upon the beds of their injury.’

He clasped the hand of the child named Kaylee whose innocent goodness had been such a beacon of light, that she had beckoned him to this ship called Serenity, as a lighthouse welcomes weary sailors home from the sea. He sorrowed for the pain of her body which he knew of old, and offered the struggle to empty himself of the desire for revenge to which most of his six decades of life had conditioned him, as a gift to the Son of Man. Whose anger at the money changers demonstrated his kinship with all who have thirsted for vengeance, and whose final act of forgiveness at Golgotha gave him hope of his own redemption.

‘Visit them, 0 Lord, with thy salvation; deliver them in thy good appointed time from their pain of body, mind, and spirit, and save their souls for thy mercies' sake.’

He looked with the eyes of compassion and pity, on the child called River whose injuries were of the mind and spirit, but no less real for their intangible nature. He repented his own manifold sins, which had left invisible scars on other innocent children and vowed to seek forgiveness by dedicating his

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 30 August 2003 23:48
Perfect. :)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 31 August 2003 06:58
I loved this story. Thank you for writing a story that showed an aspect of Book's philosophy without compromising his character or his faith.
Sunday, 14 December 2003 03:53
Definitely, a good story. I like the way you hint at Book's (dark, perhaps?) past, but never really come out and say, "Shepherd Book was once So and So, and did Such and Such..." That would ruined the flow of the story, but you kept it ambiguous... and interesting. :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 07 January 2004 00:45
Thank you so much. This story shines with faith and is such a brilliant example of why I love Book and why faith fixes us, not the other way around.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 February 2004 18:04
Excellent... more Book stories please. He is such an interesting character.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 December 2004 03:12
Wonderful. You have a way of writing from the point of view of a character about who we know so little. Book is definantly the enigma of Firefly as much as if not more than River. I love how you show his faith and shadow it with what we can only assume is a dark past. Beautiful.

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