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PHASE ONE - Epilogue

Monday, June 4, 2007

It's all over ... for someone.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2898    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Phase One

A/N: The long awaited (heh) epilogue. I'd already written this before I began posting, but from the comments on the previous postings I feel it may be a bit of a let down... no smut, sorry! But later today I'll start posting Job Satisfaction, which may involve smut.... Enjoy!!!


The young man looked around him, a small smile on his face. As the agents watched, he turned to face a young woman who was approaching, his smile growing. The couple kissed, and then re-boarded the Firefly, holding hands.

Having seen quite enough, the agent turned to face his commander, trying to keep his face impassive. Panic would not help him now.

“Affirmative, sir.” He said, keeping his voice even. “It’s him.”

The commander also kept his face impassive, and he’d had a lot more practice than the trembling agent before him. “I see,” he said, and his voice was cold. “Tell me, Agent Sixteen-oh-four, why is Doctor Tam walking around?”

The agent couldn’t help it. He looked down at his feet.

“Why is Doctor Tam kissing young women?” the commander continued.

“I...” began the agent, bile rising in his throat.

“Why is Doctor Simon Tam still alive?”

The words rung in the air, and the agent raised his eyes to his commander, unable to look away as he pulled a small rod from his pocket.

A dull buzzing filled the air, and in moments, the agent had collapsed to the floor.

“Phase One,” the commander said above the buzzing, ignoring the twitching man on the floor. “Failure.”


You know the drill... comments?

Comments
ROGUETTE
Monday, 04 June 2007 11:09
What? No ... wait ... Need more info or brain will explode!
Monday, 04 June 2007 13:00
Agreed. Need... more.
Monday, 04 June 2007 15:57
waaaa.....

More questions.... I enjoyed the series!

But I need Phase Two ;p

Look forward to reading more of your work.
Monday, 04 June 2007 18:15
Ok, that was MUCH too short!

Fitting end though as it bookmarked the prologue well.

Looking forward to the next part.
Monday, 04 June 2007 19:31
Well, I'm also assuming that there's a phase 2, so bring it on! This was way too short - but as Leiasky mentioned, it conveniently mirrored the prologue.

But, um, yeah ... we need more!
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 03:08
Too damn short for it's own good, but it does bookend this series well, Chazzer;)

BEB
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 11:27
I told you all it was weeny!
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 12:32
So... is that guy dead or just stunned?

Awesome ending, but we need Phase Two.
Or anything else by you.

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