Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA
PHASE ONE - Part One
Wednesday, May 30, 2007
Simon is feeling odd distinctly... or is that distinctly odd? ... Angsty fic, eventual S/K.
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Wednesday, 30 May 2007 12:29
Aww, it was cute that Kaylee was fussing over him. Jayne doing it was less cute.
I like that we got a quick map(?) of how sick Simon's getting. Better than dragging it over like, three chapter.
BTW- How many chapters is this going to be?
I like that we got a quick map(?) of how sick Simon's getting. Better than dragging it over like, three chapter.
BTW- How many chapters is this going to be?
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 14:48
Oh good god - this is soooo not good. Simon has the flu from hell and can't even realize that the medicine isn't actually doing the trick.
I would love to see more of Kaylee fussing over Simon and being there even when he's not aware of it. But that's just my little Silee heart going pitter-pat.
I would love to see more of Kaylee fussing over Simon and being there even when he's not aware of it. But that's just my little Silee heart going pitter-pat.
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 15:05
Oh yes, more Kaylee fussing would be very nice:)
When is someone going to realize he's taking the wrong medicine? And where is River? Her brother is getting sicker, she's probably out of her little carved-up mind! :)
When is someone going to realize he's taking the wrong medicine? And where is River? Her brother is getting sicker, she's probably out of her little carved-up mind! :)
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 16:18
> she's probably out of her little carved-up mind!
She's *always* out of her little carved-up mind. She just gets to visit a new and exciting location while she's away this time.
But that does raise the question: how come River doesn't have an inkling of what's going on? She knew Early was around and had a plan to stop him even before he got on the boat. It's been over a week and she hasn't yet caught a clue.
Kaylee's fussing is great...and I bet she is in there when he's asleep, but sneaks out before he wakes up or Mal/Jayne catch her.
Your Jayne is just made of awesome. He tries to be "good", but the capacity simply isn't there.
She's *always* out of her little carved-up mind. She just gets to visit a new and exciting location while she's away this time.
But that does raise the question: how come River doesn't have an inkling of what's going on? She knew Early was around and had a plan to stop him even before he got on the boat. It's been over a week and she hasn't yet caught a clue.
Kaylee's fussing is great...and I bet she is in there when he's asleep, but sneaks out before he wakes up or Mal/Jayne catch her.
Your Jayne is just made of awesome. He tries to be "good", but the capacity simply isn't there.
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 18:26
Definitely wondering where River is in all this, cuz other than her brief appearance at the beginning...she was strangely absent. 'Less she's been secretly diddling with things to make sure Simon doesn't cack it.
And I have to admit I was worried for a few when Simon displayed annoyance at Kaylee's reaction to him asking where River was. Thought the meds were gonna turn him into verbally-skilled version of Jayne or something;)
BEB
And I have to admit I was worried for a few when Simon displayed annoyance at Kaylee's reaction to him asking where River was. Thought the meds were gonna turn him into verbally-skilled version of Jayne or something;)
BEB
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