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Cup of Tea? - Part Five

Tuesday, March 6, 2007

The end is nigh. Will Simon finally get it right?

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A/N Well, here it is. The final part. What to say, what to say... firstly, this is probably my fave chapter, and was definately the easiest to write. It is a LOT longer than the other chapters, as they were all written while this whole story was intended as a long one shot. After I'd split up the stuff I'd already written into parts, I allowed myself a lot more room to have fun here. This chapter takes place during and after Objects in Space, and obviously some of the lines are not mine, but Joss's. Ho hum. Big thank you to everyone who has stuck with me during this ordeal, er, story. Your comments have kept me going. I have two more one shots half written, so stay with me people :)

Enjoy.

And comment, or I'll mess up the formatting on your stories, I accidentally discovered how.

Cup of Tea – Part Five

Simon pulled the covers over River, tucking her in as if she were still a child.

“You’re getting to old for this,” he told her firmly, smiling.

She replied by poking her tongue out at him. He responded with the same, and she giggled.

“Tired,” she told him.

“Sleep now,” he said softly, brushing her hair out of her face. “I’ll give you a…”

“Not me,” she said, though her eyes fluttered closed. “You.”

Simon frowned, puzzled. “Mei mei, I’m…”

“Tired,” she supplied, sleepily. “Tired of waiting.”

Simon said nothing. He had a feeling he knew exactly what, or rather who, she was talking about.

River’s eyes opened ever so slightly. “No more waiting. Go.”

“River…?” began Simon, utterly confused.

“Go,” she murmured once more, appearing to slip into a peaceful slumber.

He was almost out of the door when he hear her say softly, “Blow out the candles.”

He smiled, remembering their childhood ritual. His fingers hovered over the light switch.

“One, two, three…”

She blew in the direction of the light as he turned it off.

“I blew it out,” she teased.

“Wow,” he humoured her, “that’s a pretty big blow.”

He heard the smile in her voice. “Night Simon. No mor

Comments
Tuesday, 06 March 2007 23:02
Wham bam goddamn, Chazzer! That was utterly brilliant! Gotta put this up there with the canon moment of Silee hookup, cuz this was perfect in its mix of romance and angst:D

BEB
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 00:01
>And when his heart betrayed him, and the voice in the back of his mind, sounding annoyingly like River, told him that he was falling for her, he dismissed it.

ROTFL! Ok, this just made me laugh out loud. Sounding annoyingly like River. . .


>“Right,” he said, trying and failing to sound angry. “You were trying to spill it all over me. Now I see.”

And that made me laugh out loud too!

Very nice conclusion to this series of stories. You wove this little piece very well in between what we saw of the episodes.

Looking forward to reading what next you have in store for us! Keep writing! There can never be enough S/K stories.
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 02:34
I loved this! I was a mite disappointed that you decided to go AU at the end and not count the movie, but I think in a Jossian 'verse, without the BDM things might very well have progressed this way.

This was sweet, innocent and absolutely adorable and left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling! So glad you've joined us Chazzer and I really hope you've got more S/K to share!
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 08:26
i loved this. it was so sweet
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 12:34
That was fantastic.
I loved that cute/funny opening with River blowing out the light.
Then it went it all dark and angry with Simon blaming River and himself for the Kaylee sittuaion. I don't know why (maybe beacuse you wrote it), but that was brilliant.
And the ending, just awesome.
Bravo.

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