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Cup of Tea? - Part Four

Monday, March 5, 2007

It gets a little harder for Simon to hide his feelings for Kaylee, but be dammed if he isn't going to try. K/S

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A/N: Ok, here is the penultimate part. I'm pretty fond of this chapter :) Comments, as always, are *cough*demanded*cough* welcome. This part references War stories and The Message, plus snaps to anyone who notices the lil R.Tam files reference. Ahem. What else. The last part is over double the length of any other chapter. It was originally two parts, but it went together so well as one big thing that I called it part Five A and Part Five B. In the end, the only place I could split it that was anywhere near the half way mark meant seperating two chapters that purposely flowed together, which would ruin the effect. So, you have a BIG juicy denoument to look forward to. :) *cough*comments*cough*

EDIT. IF WERE ONE OF THE FIRST 5 PEOPLE TO READ THIS THEN YOU PROBABLY MISSED THE ENDING FEW PARAGRAPHS, WHICH FOR SOME REASON DIDN'T POST. OOOPSIE.

Cup of Tea – Part Four

Kaylee’s hands shook as she poured the tea. She was listening carefully for his footsteps, so familiar to her after all these months. She was early, she knew, but she hadn’t been able to concentrate in the engine room all morning. She’d been able to hear River screaming and screaming all morning, and almost wished that Simon would be so preoccupied that he wouldn’t come today.

She hadn’t been able to face him or River that morning. No one knew that River had taken her gun and shot those men. No one had noticed anything amiss. But Kaylee couldn’t get the image of River face afterwards out of her head. And as much as she didn’t want to keep something like this from Simon, telling him that his sister was a killer, a methodical, deadly, killer, was even less appealing.

She heard his footsteps and her heart sank. Plastering a smile on her face, she placed the cups on the table and was taking her seat as he entered, looking exhausted. He fell on the tea wordlessly, drinking deeply from the mug. She watched him silently.

He sighed with satisfaction. “I needed that,” he told her, sounding, if possible, even more tired than

Comments
Monday, 05 March 2007 15:55
Aww, I wanted to go cry with Kaylee at the end of the first part too! Simon just needs to let others help him with River. They want to. He's so stubborn! :)

I love The Message and everything surrounding that was just perfect, even down to the two of them missing tea for a few days after. Of course it was River who had to push the two of them together.

Kaylee and Simon's dreams. . . how can such little writing in those sections be so damn hot?

Nicely done! Looking forward to the last, longest chapter!
Monday, 05 March 2007 16:01
Less is more, Leiasky my friend, less is more.





Except when it totally isn't.

Thank you :)
Monday, 05 March 2007 16:46
=D loved this! can't wait for the last part. tis truly shiny chazzer!
Monday, 05 March 2007 18:49
Beautifully done - I'm still really loving how you're weaving in all the events from the series. I cannot wait to see your take on Early and the aftermath ... ooh, it's gonna be good!

I hope you post the last part soon and then I hope you've got more planned - we need more S/K on this site, gorramit!
Monday, 05 March 2007 18:50
Mad skillz, Chazzer. You have mad skillz when it comes to writing Silee:D

Utterly in awe of how perfect this chapter was, down to Simon and Kaylee feeling guilt for their parts of what happened during "The Message.";)

BEB
Monday, 05 March 2007 19:06
I loved this!
Tuesday, 06 March 2007 11:52
That part revolving around The Message was heart breaking, but in a good way.
My favourite line was: 'He’d been glad when Mal shot Tracey. Hell, he’d wanted to shoot him himself.'
I'm not sure why, but I loved it.

And if I could make a little thumbs-up with my keyboard, I would give you two for the dream sequences.

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