Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Once You Fall

Monday, February 26, 2007

Now Simon's sorted out his own love life, it's time to impart a little wisdom to the stubborn captain. S/K, implied M/I. Follow up to Once You Know

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3242    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal sat in the galley alone, clearing away the mess that had been left after dinner. The ship was quiet, as everyone had turned in for the night. Half grumbling to himself that Kaylee had neglected her turn to wash up, presumably to spend more time in Simon’s bunk, Mal stacked the dishes in the sink.

Finishing, he was about to turn in when he heard something. He paused. Someone was whistling.

Nonplussed, Mal followed the sound, and found his way to the infirmary. He watched, half in amusement, half in disbelief, as Simon moved around the room, tidying, and all the while whistling softly to himself.

When he was done, Simon dimmed the lights and turned, to find Mal standing in the doorway.

“Son of a…” he yelled. He attempted to compose himself. “Captain. Something I can do for you?”

Mal grinned. “Feelin’ a mite cheerful, aren’t we?”

Simon looked vaguely abashed, but was smiling nonetheless. “I have no idea what you’re talking about.”

“Right,” Mal agreed. “So your whistling a happy tune like you ain’t got a care in the ‘verse, that ain’t got anything to do with my lil’ Kaylee?”

Simon actually blushed at that, and Mal laughed out loud. “Oh, you’ve got it bad.”

“Maybe,” Simon said softly. The two men moved back into the infirmary, Mal leaning against the counter and watching the doctor as he found something else to fiddle with.

“And is there any particular reason why you’re interested?” Simon asked, not looking up. The though of Mal taking an interest in his love life struck an ominous chord within him.

“You just make me chuckle is all,” Mal said. “The prissy, core-bred doctor spends eight months on this boat and refuses to let go of his refined ways. Then my mechanic gets him in the sack and suddenly he’s whistling…”

Simon laughed.

“And smiling!” Mal added, sounding incredulous.

“I know, it’s hard to believe, but I’m actually not a robot,” Simon said.

There was a comfortable pause.

“So tell me,” Mal said, “what took you so long?”

Simon sobered slightly. “All sort

Comments
Monday, 26 February 2007 23:19
Aw, absolutely perfect! I'm so glad you wrote this little companion bit to the K/I convo. Now, where is our M/I?
Hmm?
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 00:18
I thoroughly enjoyed this but got confused with Simon's last comment that falling was better than climbing. It was a pleasure to see the two of them having a conversation without getting annoyed or yelling at each other. Yep, think they've grown. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
MARCHINGBAND
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 01:53
I love this story man, it makes me giggle. I wanna here more dialog from you between Simon and Mal. It's going to be funny and scarry
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 06:07
Awesome, a perfect follow-up.
You should do another sequel.
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 10:00
Thanks for all the shiny comments :)

Amdobell, Simon's comment is reffering to how both Mal and previously Simon tried to deny their feelings, prevent themselves from falling in love. What Simon is trying to say is that he took a risk and let himself fall, and that he's happier now, hint hint, Mal should do the same.

Sorry if it wasn't as clear as I'd thought.

And yeah, I do enjoy the S/M dialogue ... I always like writing conversations between guys when there are no females present... I guess because I technically have no idea how that actually goes.... odd, that.

M/I .... hmmmm.... maybe....
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 15:48
This confused me a little because your other story isn't done yet - right? So I was wondering why the skip until I figured out that this was just a different story all together.

I like the Simon / Mal discussion. I don't think we got enough of that in the series, and certainly not the film. It's good to see them not fighting for a change.
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 16:19
Eeep, sorry for all the confusion. Maybe this wasn't quite ready to be posted...
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 23:57
Oh...this was ready for posting, Chazzer. It was just the metaphor you chose for the conversation wasn't quite transparent. I certainly got the idea...but I gots me some odd brain waves. Tend to see things others don't;D

And please give us the scene where Mal and Inara jointly come to the conclusion about needing to confess to the other person about their individual feelings!

;D

BEB

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