So, this is my first ever Firefly Fic. I woke up half an hour ago with this in my head, and scribbled it down, and here it is. I ususally write things better when I don't take my time... anyway, it hasn't been beta-d or anything, so feel free to call me up on anything. I am in the middle of a much longer S/K piece, this one just sort of popped out. Also, just so we're clear, I am English. In the Harry Potter fandom, fan fiction writers get a LOT of stick for writing Americanisms into their work. So I figure it's only fair that I get the same treatment. If any Britishisms annoy you, PLEASE let me know and I will try to fix it. Enjoy (please!)
Once you know
Inara was sitting on her bed, thinking, when Kaylee bounced into the shuttle, skipped over to her, and flopped down on the bed beside her, beaming up at her friend.
“It’s true what they say,” Kaylee told her, in the same blissful, relaxed tone she’d been speaking in all week.
“What’s that, mei mei?” Inara inquired, amused.
“It really is better when you’re in love,” Kaylee wiggled her eyebrows a little, ensuring that Inara didn’t miss the full meaning of her statement.
Inara allowed herself an indulging smile. “Is that so?”
“It surely is,” Kaylee murmured, her eyes fluttering closed.
Inara giggled. “So, top marks for Simon then?”
Kaylee’s eyes flicked open at once, now filled with a mischievous glint that spread to her wicked smile. “I’ll say.” She licked her lips. “I dunno how he got to be so good, but I don’t think he learned it at medical school!”
Inara reached down and stroked her friends her, resigning herself to the play by play she had known she would receive all week. “Tell me,”
Kaylee closed her eyes once more, as if to allow her self to fully access her memories. “It aint like sex I’ve ever had before ‘Nara. It’s different. Sometimes it’s real slow, when we’re tired, an’ we barely even move, we just lie there kissing, an’ it’s …” she trailed off, unable to find an adequate word.
Inara simply watched
That was beautiful and fantastically written.
I definatly want to see more.
More, more, more! Thanks for posting!
Not that all comments aren't appreciated :D:D:D:D
And yes, sequels are a surething :)
You can't take the sky from me
What really makes this brilliant is that it's Kaylee who is teaching Inara about what it's like to be with someone who loves you completely. It's the reversal of roles/positions between these surrogate sisters that, to me, really helps to make this something that fits pretty much seemlessly with what Joss & co. have created:D
Oh...and I wanna see sequels! Mal and Simon having their moment where it's the usually repressed Simon explaining to Mal about loving Kaylee and building a relationship with her! Mal and Inara stumbling towards the finish line of trying to have something like what Simon and Kaylee have! Let the warm and fuzzy begin!
;D
BEB
And it isn't my first fan fic, it's my first FIREFLY fanfic. I've written a bit of HP.
:D
Thanks again. xxxx
And as was mentioned before, it's interesting to see Inara and Kaylee "trading" places.
Keep up the wonderful writing.
Rob O.
ps where is your Potterfic posted?
My Potter fan fics are all posted at mugglenet fanfiction, under the author name hpmaniac666.
hold me on, I'll link ya. http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewuser.php?uid=676
There ya go xxx
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