Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Once You Know

Thursday, February 15, 2007

Companions aren’t supposed to fall in love. Inara wants to know what it feels like to hear those three special words. S/K, implied M/I. (First ever FF fic, be kind :D)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3731    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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So, this is my first ever Firefly Fic. I woke up half an hour ago with this in my head, and scribbled it down, and here it is. I ususally write things better when I don't take my time... anyway, it hasn't been beta-d or anything, so feel free to call me up on anything. I am in the middle of a much longer S/K piece, this one just sort of popped out. Also, just so we're clear, I am English. In the Harry Potter fandom, fan fiction writers get a LOT of stick for writing Americanisms into their work. So I figure it's only fair that I get the same treatment. If any Britishisms annoy you, PLEASE let me know and I will try to fix it. Enjoy (please!)

Once you know

Inara was sitting on her bed, thinking, when Kaylee bounced into the shuttle, skipped over to her, and flopped down on the bed beside her, beaming up at her friend.

“It’s true what they say,” Kaylee told her, in the same blissful, relaxed tone she’d been speaking in all week.

“What’s that, mei mei?” Inara inquired, amused.

“It really is better when you’re in love,” Kaylee wiggled her eyebrows a little, ensuring that Inara didn’t miss the full meaning of her statement.

Inara allowed herself an indulging smile. “Is that so?”

“It surely is,” Kaylee murmured, her eyes fluttering closed.

Inara giggled. “So, top marks for Simon then?”

Kaylee’s eyes flicked open at once, now filled with a mischievous glint that spread to her wicked smile. “I’ll say.” She licked her lips. “I dunno how he got to be so good, but I don’t think he learned it at medical school!”

Inara reached down and stroked her friends her, resigning herself to the play by play she had known she would receive all week. “Tell me,”

Kaylee closed her eyes once more, as if to allow her self to fully access her memories. “It aint like sex I’ve ever had before ‘Nara. It’s different. Sometimes it’s real slow, when we’re tired, an’ we barely even move, we just lie there kissing, an’ it’s …” she trailed off, unable to find an adequate word.

Inara simply watched

Comments
Thursday, 15 February 2007 11:29
A great big aww for you.
That was beautiful and fantastically written.
I definatly want to see more.
Thursday, 15 February 2007 11:29
Cool, first to comment :)
Thursday, 15 February 2007 13:47
Very nicely done! Looking forward to more.
Thursday, 15 February 2007 14:07
that's nice
Thursday, 15 February 2007 16:45
For a first time outing, this is terrific! I love your Kaylee ... now, I would like to see the companion piece with maybe Mal and Simon discussing things in their "manly" way and then the third installment with Mal and Inara ...

More, more, more! Thanks for posting!
Thursday, 15 February 2007 16:59
This was an excellent first time fic! Would love to see some longer pieces and as an avid S/K fan I'm looking forward to reading your longer piece.
Thursday, 15 February 2007 17:16
Thanks a lot to everyone, it's especially nice to read comments from people who's fics I love (blackbeanie, TamSibling, Leiasky)

Not that all comments aren't appreciated :D:D:D:D

And yes, sequels are a surething :)
Thursday, 15 February 2007 17:28
This was excellent! Can't believe it is your first fic and looking forward to more. Your Kaylee was spot-on and I loved the introspective Inara showing her feelings at the end with that single tear. Maybe listening to Kaylee enthuse about falling in love will help her to stop sitting on the fence her own self. Can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 15 February 2007 22:40
Yes! This is definitely something utterly brilliant! If I wasn't a trusting sort, I would swear you were pulling our chaings, Chazzer, about this being your first fic;D

What really makes this brilliant is that it's Kaylee who is teaching Inara about what it's like to be with someone who loves you completely. It's the reversal of roles/positions between these surrogate sisters that, to me, really helps to make this something that fits pretty much seemlessly with what Joss & co. have created:D

Oh...and I wanna see sequels! Mal and Simon having their moment where it's the usually repressed Simon explaining to Mal about loving Kaylee and building a relationship with her! Mal and Inara stumbling towards the finish line of trying to have something like what Simon and Kaylee have! Let the warm and fuzzy begin!

;D

BEB
Thursday, 15 February 2007 22:57
Thanks a lot. A Mal Simon equivalent isn't something I'd thought of but I am warming to the idea.

And it isn't my first fan fic, it's my first FIREFLY fanfic. I've written a bit of HP.

:D

Thanks again. xxxx
Friday, 16 February 2007 02:15
Beautiful words and sentiment,

...very Firefly
Friday, 16 February 2007 04:06
I truly enjoyed this piece. I may have mentioned this before, but it's worth repeating. Firefly and Serenity were as much about the little moments between the characters as they were about the big dramatic ones. The quiet moments make you truly care about the characters, and create the relationships that make their love for eachother more believable.

And as was mentioned before, it's interesting to see Inara and Kaylee "trading" places.

Keep up the wonderful writing.


Rob O.
Friday, 16 February 2007 04:11
I loved the fact that Kaylee was telling Inara bout somethign for a change. Great job. Carn't wait till you post the S/K fic.
Friday, 16 February 2007 09:56
I liked this a lot. Couldn't see anything in it that marked it as Brit or US - if you take the language and syntax that Joss wrote, and draw from that, I don't see how anyone could tell just by looking :) (I can be exceptionally dull on the subject of structure and semiotics)
ps where is your Potterfic posted?
Friday, 16 February 2007 10:11
More big thanks :D

My Potter fan fics are all posted at mugglenet fanfiction, under the author name hpmaniac666.

hold me on, I'll link ya. http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewuser.php?uid=676

There ya go xxx
Tuesday, 20 February 2007 15:39
that was a great first fic

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