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Everyday Hero

Saturday, May 31, 2003

Sequel to Big Damn Heroes. Wash has found Kaylee. A discussion on the nature of courage

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EVERYDAY HERO

With gratitude to Archer and LJC for providing very quick and insightful advice and proof reading.

Spoilers for Out of Gas, War Stories, and Objects in Space. This takes place immediately after my prior story Big Damn Heroes. A conversation on the nature of courage between Wash and Kaylee.

Wash was looking for Kaylee. She had been avoiding everybody on the ship for a couple of days, not taking meals with the crew, and generally staying out of sight. Mal had been looking for her too. He’d been particularly unsubtle about it, roving through the ship and calling out her name. She hadn’t wanted to be found and she hadn’t been. But Wash planned to be more crafty about the whole searching thing.

Serenity wasn’t that big, and the Captain had looked in all of the places that Kaylee could be. That meant she wasn’t staying in one place. She was on the move, and the best place for her to move to would be where the captain had just looked. She would count on him not coming back to that spot for a bit, at least. So Wash was on his way to Shuttle 2. Mal had just poked his head in there and looked, before he came up to the bridge. Wash had kept him talking on the bridge for long enough for Kaylee to get to the shuttle from wherever she had been, so now Wash had a middling fair chance of catching her there.

He opened the hatch and went in, pulling it closed behind him. Sure enough, there she was, on her back, waist deep under the console with the cover plate off, her tools scattered about as if she was working. But he didn’t think she was working, not really. It just came natural to Kaylee to do her thinking with her hands in the guts of some machine, like he did his at the helm, staring at the stars.

“Hey, Kaylee, something wrong with the shuttle?” he said cheerily

‘Oh, yeah, brilliant line Wash, that’ll get her to open right up to you.’

“Nah, Wash, not to say wrong. Just tryin’ to tune her up and find what causes that rattle. I been tryin’ to find that

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 31 May 2003 02:24
BC

Alright for Wash. Yeah, everyday heroes. It can take a lot to let your guard down with people.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 31 May 2003 04:14
Love it. Keep writing please :)
Saturday, 31 May 2003 13:26
Defender,

I read your little story and I can only say damn you are good...I can even see the characters in my mind having this conversation.

I agree with anon up there...keep writing...
Tuesday, 03 June 2003 07:46
Thank you much for all your kind words. I just kept having thoughts about what would be going thru their minds and they started talking to each other so I took notes. No really thank you for reviewing and leaving comments it makes writing so much more enjoyable when you are not doing it in a vacuum.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 June 2003 17:47
Loved this! I think you nailed the characters and their tone. Is there more coming to this? Maybe, finally, the conversation between Mal and Kaylee?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 June 2003 17:48
Loved this! I think you nailed the characters and their tone. Is there more coming to this? Maybe, finally, the conversation between Mal and Kaylee?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 June 2003 00:12
reply to anonymous of 6/4

No I haven't written the conversation between Mal and Kaylee, hadn't really thought of it. Working on one between Mal and Wash bout Zoe before they got married and one very long story about ow they got Serenity. I appreciate your comments and that you even read my stuff, please feel free to make critical suggestions, I want to get better
Friday, 20 June 2003 16:57
Fantastic grasp of the characters. I'm really liking your story-telling.
Keep it coming, please!
Saturday, 28 February 2004 21:04
Mal and Zoe, they’ve killed a lot of men, more’n you and I ever will. And to make that possible, they had to shut off part of themselves. To do that a person has to say 'I will only care about what is on this side of my gun. ‘My crew, my ship, my cause, my life.' Anything on the other side can be sacrificed to protect what is on this side. They had to stop thinking about the fact that those folks may have families and loved ones and a life of their own to lead. They pay a price for that hardness. It’s why Mal and Inara can’t seem to . . . well, he just can’t.

That whole thing is just SO shiny...sums up Mal and Zoe so perfectly..

Both this and 'Big Damn Heroes' were spellbinding and so very true to the characters - Xie-xie
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 March 2006 13:13
Very cute :]
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 04:03
Once again, masterful. I love the bits about Mal having someone else to love so Zoe could too. I love Wash. I try to write him the comic/philosopher also. If that is the correct lable.

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