Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
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Sunday, 21 January 2007 16:41
Next chapter: more decisions for Mal, this time with regard to what help they can get for Simon. Simon and Kaylee play cards, with a little help from River and Jayne.

Thank you to all who have read and commented. Those of you who notice these things will have seen that I have changed my policy on comments. I would ask that if you can't be positive, at least please be polite. In general, I perfer to recieve critiques by PM.
Monday, 22 January 2007 01:38
120 reads and no comments?

Seriously, are there bots reading this? I don't mind if they are, but they should at least comment, right?

Monday, 22 January 2007 06:13
Oh, goody. Another reader on the crew. Gentlemen, prepare to start your drinking!

Simon seems to be handling things well so far - no major signs of depression. Is this going to change?

Monday, 22 January 2007 07:06
yay! more please
Monday, 22 January 2007 09:43
>Oh, goody. Another reader on the crew. Gentlemen, prepare to start your drinking!

a) she's not on the crew - she's a prisoner (albiet with parole)

b) I thought Mal already had :)

>Simon seems to be handling things well so far - no major signs of depression. Is this going to change?

I intend for Simon's mood to flucuate with the fortunes "of war" - as he makes progress - or doesn't.

Anyway, this is meant to be seen as progress - previously he's been suicidal enough for his sister to offer to euthanise him.
Monday, 22 January 2007 12:52
Excellent stuff here, girlfan! Definitely loved how you handled the Zoe-Simon-River moment in the infirmary - Panto!Simon and Squishy!Zoe rock ;D - and the Mal-Ceres flashback and conversation about Ceres' status aboard Serenity;)

BEB

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