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Even Roses Have Thorns, Chapter Fifty-Two

Saturday, May 5, 2007

Penultimate chapter. (No, penultimate is not a fancier version of 'ultimate'.) Some fluff - Jayne gets to go home. PG13 to be on the safe side (probably G, at least if you ignore the comments - man, I can't spell). Canon pairings +1 (River/ofc).

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Saturday, 05 May 2007 12:08
Okay, it's taken me coffee, tea, hot chocolate, scotch, sljivovica, and an angry email from my thesis supervisor to bring you this (okay, I made the last one up - but only the last one!). It's not perfect, but I'm getting vertigo from all my navel gazing - and I'm drunk, and late, and not at all obsessed with approval - so here it is.

And? In case you're wondering, yes, I *am* as drunk and bruised as Jayne after a night in a whore house. I wasn't joking about that part.

Hell, I probably wouldn't even be joking about the angry email if my supervisor wasn't such a nice guy.
Saturday, 05 May 2007 12:08
Oh, yeah?

And I love you *all*.
Saturday, 05 May 2007 12:39
"the substance of things hoped for, and the evidence of things not seen"

West Wing fans are correct if they caught the allusion.
Saturday, 05 May 2007 13:29
Wooo! Glad you updated, it's seems to have been a while.

Love this. Of course I love this. You wrote it. Can't wait for last chapter :D:D:D:D:D

And drunkness is the way forward!
Saturday, 05 May 2007 14:50
> it's seems to have been a while.

That, sadly, is because it *has* been a while.


> And drunkness is the way forward!

No kidding :)
Saturday, 05 May 2007 16:45
Welocme back! As Homer Simpson once so succinctly put it: "Beer. The cause of - and solution to - all life's problems." I perosnally extend that mantra to include rum, gin, vodka, tequila, bourbon, whiskey, and whatever else happens to be available.

Best line of the whole thing? "Too bad Wash didn't live to see this." I totally had the mental image of a stream of incredible beautiful women lining up in front of a house, with every male in the group's jaw on the floor. It was indeed the perfect moment for a classic Wash line, and glad to see Zoe pick up the idea.

Nice to see the hydroponics bay is up and running. And River's selection of flowers was so sweet.

But the ending was so bittersweet. Can River just lock her bother and Kaylee in a room until they actually speak to each other of something of substance?
Saturday, 05 May 2007 16:45
Heh. I meant "brother" in the last sentence, not "bother."

Paging Dr. Freud!
Saturday, 05 May 2007 19:11
Dammit, where's my Kaylee/Elle Cobb catfight?!? Still ... I could see Kaylee opting out of that tussle, given that the Cobb girls are over six feet in height ...


Monday, 07 May 2007 20:51
Oh...this was just all kinds of spectacular, girlfan! Between the crew's reaction to meeting Jayne's siblings - and I am certainly glad to know Jayne isn't alone in his torment about being given a feminine-sounding moniker;D - and that Jayne has a place where he doesn't have to be a hard-ass;D

And I gotta agree with ManicGiraffe...Simon and Kaylee need to be locked in a room for while to plow through their issues. If only to be friends again:(

BEB

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