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Bones Break, Words Crush

Saturday, December 30, 2006

It was a real nice party, until words were spoke. Set post-BDM.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3425    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: for danniisupernova over at livejournal. This one's for you!



The party had been a very good one. A little fancier than the one where Mal got himself wed, but not so much as the one where Mal got himself stabbed. Still, it was nice to get off the ship and just relax. Even River and Simon were able to partake of the festivities, the doc even loosening up some to let River dance and laugh.

And how she danced. The small band excelled in folk music and River shone. Her face was glowing as she kicked and leaped her way across the wooden dance floor. Her eyes were the clearest they’d been since Miranda. For the first time in a very long while, River was content.

Simon smiled broadly at his sister then scrunched his shoulder as Kaylee breathed into his ear, knowing how sensitive her man was. She giggled and smiled as he laughed along with her. Finally, it seemed, he was letting himself feel.

When the fiddler took the stage, a roar went up. The couple turned their heads to find that the new player was a shepherd, a much younger one than either had been accustomed to. When he drew the bow across the strings, it was as though heaven itself had touched him the music was so wondrous. Kaylee latched onto Simon’s wrist, jumped up and dragged him to the dance floor to join in the others who were now crowded onto the small area. The dance itself was unfamiliar to the mechanic, but was simple enough to learn.

The whole outdoor party was loud, boisterous and the most fun the crew of Serenity had had since no one could remember. Mal, though, was being more than a little cautious, taking his drinks only from Inara and then only after checking that no laurel graced his head.

Zoe watched it all from her spot in the corner. Her drink had warmed in the evening air, but she wasn’t much interested in it. Other memories filled her, of another time when

Comments
Saturday, 30 December 2006 02:59
Oh damn! I had no idea what Simon had said and that was a nice twist! A very nice twist.

Something tells me others will demand this as well, so I'll start - SEQUEL!

Thanks for sharing - that was very well written for all the characters and I really liked the idea of them all having a good time.
Saturday, 30 December 2006 04:25
I'm with Tam Sibling and will continue the chant for SEQUEL!

Simon is such a boob!
Saturday, 30 December 2006 07:37
Gorramit, so Simon has secret yearnings for Inara? OOoh, talk about complications! I want to know what happens next! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 30 December 2006 18:08
oh no, poor kaylee...

i didn't see that coming, that was a nice little twist right there at the end.

much kudos!
Saturday, 30 December 2006 19:27
Knowing you and the person you wrote this for are Jaylee fans, I expected the inevitable outcome of this piece. But at least it was done in a different, creative way.
Sunday, 31 December 2006 01:10
Whoa! That came out of nowhere! (At least to me.) Great ending!
Sunday, 31 December 2006 21:55
Well...that's a twist! And Kaylee's is in an even bigger pickle cuz she can't go to Inara to vent about Simon:(

Still...SEQUEL! We must have a sequel! You can't just leave it there;)

BEB
Sunday, 22 April 2007 05:06
Holy crap, didn't see that coming.

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