Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

C.C.M Ch 12

Sunday, November 26, 2006

They've dealt with pirates and the Alliance. Now they have to deal with each other.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3123    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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An odd feeling of anti-climax on the ship. They are safe, unpursued and in possession of their prize, with a course set in for a rendez-vous off Beylix. Reaction takes them different ways. Kaylee is preventing Simon from getting clean and tidy again; he looks just fine to her, all greased up. Simon, against his better judgement, but amused, poses for a capture which will come back to haunt him some day, he fears.

Mal stomps onto the bridge, throws himself into his seat.

“Anything wrong , sir?”

“No, everything’s shiny.” Punches buttons savagely. “I just love falling over necking teenagers on my boat.”

Ah. Zoe sits back. She’s not going to say ‘told you so’. Waits.

“Gorram, Zoe. Girl just looked at me, and said ‘walk on by’, like I ain’t gonna care that she’s bein’...mauled by one of Jayne’s kin!” Bang, stab. “Well, we ain’t keepin’ him. Don’t care how many of them big soft eyes she makes at me.”

Mal’s grinding his teeth. She can hear him. Little devil voice (sounds suspiciously like Wash) prods her to say,

“What does the Doc think on it?”

“Oh, she done told him to walk on by, too.”

Course he’s gonna worry about his li’l albatross. She ain’t more than a bit of a girl, an’ those Alliance hun dan cutting her about an’ all...needs someone as can take care of her (‘cos someone that can leave a whole room of folks in bits needs that, truly.) He’s the Captain, it’s his job to worry, his job to protect her. Should be him telling her that everything was going to be fine, should be him...Mal’s mind slams to a halt.

Don’tthinkthatdon’teverthinkthatgorramit

Mal is aware that the one of architects of their present safety has proved her worth over again. (And that they owe more than a little to the kid.) Turns to Zoe. There ain’t many folks in the ‘Verse got judgement he trusts above his own.

“What do we do now, Zoe?”

“I’m going to have a sleep.” Shrugs, deliberately misunderstands him. “Eight hours to Beylix.”

“Didn’t mean that.” Hand

Comments
Sunday, 26 November 2006 19:48
Oh...now that's the way to come back to the fold, SpaceAnJL! Brilliant dialogue, beautiful character moments and bountiful humour!

;D

Can't wait to see how Jayne's conversation with his sister abour Tyler goes. Doubt it's gonna be anything resembling smooth;)

BEB
NBZ
Sunday, 26 November 2006 20:44
Welcome back!

One fine story, told in a mighty fine manner.

can't wait for more.

Gonna repeat BEB by saying brilliant dialogue.
Sunday, 26 November 2006 21:20
I really liked this, especially the thoughts Jayne has about his own youth and running away. The man has grown and that is good to see. Also loved the rest of the banter and dialogue too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 27 November 2006 03:13
Very nice, very nice. I laughed out loud and snorted a few times. I'm still smiling.
Cap'n said he's sorry? You've done the impossible. Pork on the wing!
Piiigs iiiin spaaaaaace!(sorry, it's late here).
Monday, 27 November 2006 15:05
Welcome Back, SpaceAnJL! It's been awhile, and this was was worth the wait. Hope life is being a little kinder.

<Took the big man on to save his skin, but he recognised his talents from the get go. He’s one of the biggest, meanest, dirtiest fighters Mal has ever met, a brawler, a tracker, a deadshot with most any weapon you give him. Not too bright, and not too honest, but not the dimwitted scumbag he’d seemed at first meeting. Deadwood had been a real surprise. But you could never tell what would drive a man.>

It's writing like this and your perceptiveness that has made me a huge fan of your work.

"More, please?" *holds out bowl, grins hungrily*

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