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The Bravest Thing Part 7

Monday, November 13, 2006

Taking place after the BDM. Jayne and Zoe, pairing. Jayne’s secret personal grief from his past ends up pushing him closer to Zoe than he could ever imagine.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1706    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Bravest Thing Part 7 by Nailani Williams

Disclaimer: No Copyright Infringement intended so Joss put down the Sword of Truth!

Summary: Taking place after the BDM. Jayne and Zoe, pairing. Jayne’s secret personal grief from his past ends up pushing him closer to Zoe than he could ever imagine.

Rating: NC-17

A/N: Thank you all for the feedback, it really keeps me going! Big shout out to Vera and BEB you guys rock, I look forward to your thoughts on this part.

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Zoe:

We were finally on Bernadette.

Serenity touched down around thirty minutes ago. It took us only ten minutes for Jayne, Mal, and I to load their cargo and now we were just waiting for the companions hired gun. That set Jayne in a fine mood, he walked up the catwalk grumbling about how it was unprofessional to keep your clients waiting. I followed him.

We watched as Mal and Inara, greeted our passengers, John and Bethanie. They were acting exactly like Kaylee and Simon which made us all cringe. One overly expressive couple was one thing, but two was pushing it. At least the older couples kept it in the bunk. I had to stop myself there. Was Jayne and I, a couple?

“What are we doing?” I asked Jayne who was standing next to me on the catwalk.

He took my hand, “I don’t know yet, bao bei, just let whatever this is happen. It’s been along time since I’ve done this whole relationship stuff, so you’re gonna have to let me fumble through it, dong ma?” he said and I nodded.

“I’ll try not to pick at it,” I touched his back and he wrapped his arm around my waist and pulled me closer. Then he gasped and stilled against me.

“Jayne, What?” I looked at his face and he was as pale as a ghost.

“Son of a whore!” he yelled running down the catwalk. I followed his eyes. He was running after the companion’s hired man who just strolled in.

“Jayne!” I screamed out and the hired man looked up with fear in his eyes. He went for his gun, but Jayne was already there. He kicked him with all his force in the balls and then punched t

Comments
Monday, 13 November 2006 22:45
I'm weeping!! That was so beautiful. Well done! Zoe literally saved his life and he realized that he wants more than revenge! I am anxiously waiting for part 8.
Tuesday, 14 November 2006 04:21
Holy...moly...that was amazing! And I ain't talking about the sex neither;)

Definitely was completely shocked shitless when Jayne just went at the nameless pile of hou zi fei hua...especially when Jayne opened with the Forbidden Blow and just went to town from there. Even more shocked when you had the battered gunhand turn out to be the survivor of the band of scum who killed Vera and Ruby. Now that was a twist worthy of Joss himself:D

Oh...and before I forget: the sex-related NC-17 moments? I am barely inches from being a puddle of goo on the floor cuz it was that good. Makes me have high hopes for my own adventures some time in the future, if you know what I mean;D

BEB

P.S. Eagerly await Part 8...cuz Mal (and John and Bethanie) will want answers why Jayne just laid waste to a supposed complete stranger and needed 3 people to publically hold him down...and Zoe to actually go into mighty emotional territory to get him to see reason:)
Tuesday, 14 November 2006 19:27
Hey good stuff...I spent the past hour or so reading your story from the lst part and might I say good stuff. I always enjoy a good Zoe + Jayne combo. Can't wait for the rest of your tale.
Tonya
Sunday, 19 November 2006 01:59
The last paragraph had just the right amount of sappy vs. tough Jayne to make me smile :D
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 03:40
it was kindof an abrupt thrust into the NC-17 bit (no pun intended), but the afterthought for Jayne's POV really brought around the story arc.

as soon as jayne saw the guy, i knew he was that one who got away, and i was glad he got the stuffing knocked out of him!

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