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The Circular Irony Part 3

Friday, December 15, 2006

After the BDM. Zayne, M/I, S/K, R/OC pairing. Taking place after the events of “The Bravest Thing” and “The Welcoming Committee”. When Mal gets a job on Persephone he realizes he’s transporting a new generation of Browncoats, who have their own special person straight out of the Alliance Academy. Meanwhile Zoe and Jayne work out their working relationship and River gets a new creep-a-fying boyfriend.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1950    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Circular Irony Part 3 by Nailani Williams

Disclaimer: No Copyright Infringement intended so Joss put down the Sword of Infinite Truths!

Summary: After the BDM. Zayne, M/I, S/K, R/OC pairing. Taking place after the events of “The Bravest Thing” and “The Welcoming Committee”. When Mal gets a job on Persephone he realizes he’s transporting a new generation of Browncoats, who have their own special person straight out of the Alliance Academy. Meanwhile Zoe and Jayne work out their working relationship and River gets a new creep-a-fying boyfriend.

Rating: PG-13

A/N: I am so sorry for the delay, it’s the holidays and I seem to be swamped with family obligations. I’ll try to get the next part out sooner! :D!

I dedicated this to all the brave writers of Zayne fic!

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Mal:

I was tense, and it wasn’t because of the New Browncoats… it was because of Zoe. Never did I think she’d ever look at me with questioning eyes, but she did now and it cut me to the quick. And what made it worst, was that there were children reinitiating a war that we lost. All because of Miranda.

I was humped and I knew it. I couldn’t just allow these children to sacrifice themselves. I couldn’t let the Alliance put them to death because I knew it’d be broadcasted on every wave in the verse. They would be made an example of. And that was blood I couldn’t bare to have on my hands.

I just hoped Zoe would be with me on this. I hoped that somewhere inside her she still felt like a soldier.

Everyone was sitting around the table when I walked in from the cockpit. I looked at their faces. Some were expectant… others were annoyed.

“So cap, what going on?” Kaylee was the first to speak to me with a huge smile. I looked at her.

“As you all know we‘re going to Persephone to do a job…” I stopped when Zoe and Jayne began grumbling and shaking their heads. Inara’s hand took mine. I smiled briefly at her. “This job is with the New Browncoats.”

“No way, Mal,” Simon stood up. “you know River and I are still wanted by the A

Comments
Friday, 15 December 2006 12:04
I absolutely adored this especially because of the way you wrote Inara, It is such a pleasure to see Inara actually standing by Mal for once instead of tearing him to pieces a snark at a time. Sad that Zoe is so reluctant and almost resentful. I just hope trying to save those kids from themselves doesn't get them all killed. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 15 December 2006 14:02
Very cool concept. I am liking this more and more as I read it. I'm still not so sure about Zoe/Jayne, but I really like your Mal/Inara and the concept that the 'verse is just getting uglier by the minute since Miranda.

I can totally see Mal carrying that weight solely on his shoulders ... and I can see Inara fighting to keep him afloat.
Friday, 15 December 2006 14:50
Great work here, Nailani! Definitely loving this storyline and how we're finally getting to see Mal and Zoe suffering through a schism that is slowly eating at their friendship (I squee all manfully at the schisming cuz I know Joss would have worked something like this into a later season after Wash's death and things had gone further to crap;D)!

Only quibble I had was some of Inara's internal monologue seemed...off. Mainly I thought some of the turns of phrase like "my man" and "mucho bravado" seemed too informal and slangy for Inara...even when she's relaxed. Though I think for the latter quibble, I am assuming you meant "macho bravado," not "mucho bravado";D

BEB
NAILANI
Friday, 15 December 2006 16:51
Thank all of you for the feedback. And yes I did mean macho bravado, BEB. That's what I get for doing edits at 1 something in the morning. LOL!!

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