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The Bravest Thing Part 6

Monday, November 13, 2006

Taking place after the BDM. Jayne and Zoe, pairing. Jayne’s secret personal grief from his past ends up pushing him closer to Zoe than he could ever imagine.

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The Bravest Thing Part 6 by Nailani Williams

Disclaimer: No Copyright Infringement intended so Joss put down the Sword of Truth!

Summary: Taking place after the BDM. Jayne and Zoe, pairing. Jayne’s secret personal grief from his past ends up pushing him closer to Zoe than he could ever imagine.

Rating: PG-13

A/N: Sorry, last part was so sad, but unfortunately my Jayne is a little more morose, than Joss’. Thank for the feedback, it really keeps me going! Tamsibling dropped a line…Woo hoo! Your fan fic rocks hard!

I know the Zanye ain’t everybody’s cup of tea…but I like being on the under dog’s side, LOL!

Teaser: Wash won’t leave me alone so we might see him in so sort of way in the future. Just not this part LOL!

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Zoe:

We were ten hours away from Bernadette and Jayne was avoiding me like the plague and I couldn’t figure out if it was my reaction to our almost kiss by the light of morning he was worried about or was it his own issues he was working through?

All I really knew was that I missed him and his avoiding me was making me plenty mad. I was on the catwalk watching him work out when River came and sat next to me. She looked up at me until I stare down at her.

“He’s being pieced back together, like a huge Jayne puzzle, he wants to come to you whole,” she whispered with a smile.

“You reading him after he asked you not to?’ I asked and she looked away and blushed.

“He’s projecting so loud I can’t help, but over hear,” she hunched her shoulders and I smirked.

“Well you keep you’re far reaching ears to yourself around me young lady,” I teased and she giggled.

“He visits me too, you know,” River said and I sighed.

“Wash?” I asked and she nodded.

“He keeps me laughing until my stomach hurts when I wake up,” she said and I smile wistfully.

“Yup, he does that,” I said and River nodded.

Mal came from the cockpit and called us all in there. Inara’s was going to tell us about our job she set up for us. Ten minutes later, we were crowding around waiting to be brie

Comments
Monday, 13 November 2006 03:21
Hmm ... this is a really cool take on Zayne, although I think they're both a bit too sweet for their own good. But I like the idea of Zoe needing to reconnect ... and Jayne's past with his wife, daughter and unborn son dying just tugs at my heartstrings.

I'll be interested to see where this goes ... and I'm really surprised Mal didn't kill them both when he caught them smoochin' ... now that would be a fight to end all fights!
NAILANI
Monday, 13 November 2006 03:39
Thanks for the feedback Tamsibling! I’m glad you’re reading and responding to my fic even though you’re not a Zanye fan, I know that Jayne and Zoe are acting a little too sweet, but just called this the honeymoon period, LOL! As for Mal, and why he’s not trying to shove Jayne out the airlock for kissing his first mate, I'm going to adress all of that soon! keep reading and thanks again!
Monday, 13 November 2006 04:43
Hmm...I think Inara's been schooling our Captain in being a tad more openly sensitive about other people and their feelings. Cuz I too was waiting for Mal to flip out, even temporarily till intentions were made clear;)

And I don't think they're being too sweet right now. Both of them are still hanging on to their brooding and stoicism...though there is some opening up going on;)

BEB
Monday, 13 November 2006 12:07
I like how they're opening up to each other little by little. Looking forward to fireworks, jealousy, threats - all those things we love about Jayne and Zoe! I am enjoying this story so much. I check the site like twice a day!
Tuesday, 13 March 2007 03:27
cute, but maybe losing some of zoe's mourning. also watch that straight exposition in the middle. it's nice to know the story of jayne on deadwood, but you threw it at us all at once. up till now, it's been a nice slow reveal. since he's thinking about deadwood, i'd consider turning the exposition into a time-specific memory (i.e., the day they first met, the first time he held ruby, that one bar where he had twenty shots and slugged the barkeep for not giving him another, how his mom knocked him over the head with an umbrella so she could drag him home)... a series of time-specific snapshots would give more power to an exposition like that. and instead of tying it together with "after years of this", you just tie it together with the imagery of the locations on deadwood, since it was pondering the planet (and most likely specific places on the planet where these events happened) that brought on the reverie.

nice work.

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