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NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 35 - Final Chapter of Part II

Friday, October 27, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 35: Alex is finally home, Mal makes a promise, and Zoë has something to say.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3230    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimers : Everything belongs to Joss, except for one character of my creation.

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“I see you took my suggestion,” Simon said to Mal as he entered the cargo bay leaning on one of Alex’s crutches for support.

“Yeah, you’re fulla good ideas,” Mal answered, only halfway paying attention as his eyes swept the bay. He spotted Alex coming out of her room with Kaylee carrying her bag, and met them as they slowly climbed the steps.

“Got everything?”

Alex gestured to the duffel over Kaylee’s shoulder. “All I have is in there.”

She let Kaylee walk ahead with the bag, and stopped as Mal looked at her intently.

“Ready?” he asked.

She looked up at him, putting on her bravest face. “As ready as I can be.”

Mal put his hands on her shoulders. “Remember what I said?”

She looked up at him as his lips started to form the words; then she took them from him.

“One foot in front of the other.” She gave him a small smile.

He smiled back and squeezed her shoulders. “I’m gonna be in touch. Often. Now, I’ll try not to be a pest, but I ain’t guaranteein’ anything.”

“Be a pest. Please.”

“And you’ll keep in touch with me...with us? Let us know how things are?”

She nodded. “I will.”

“You sure? You’re not just sayin’ that to get rid of me, are you?” The smile was still on his lips, but his eyes were solemn above it.

She nodded at him again. “I’m absolutely sure.”

“If anything changes...you have any problems...even if you just wanna jabber at one of us here, you ‘wave,” he said. “Understand?”

The ship opened up behind them, and the ramp lowered to the bustle of the Boros docks. Alex craned her neck to see out.

“C’mon,” Mal said, putting an arm around her shoulders and positioning the crutch under his arm again. Together they made their way slowly through the bay, each walking on a crutch for support.

Zoë chuckled at them. “You two make quite a pair! I need a capture of this,” she laughed.

Mal watched

Comments
Friday, 27 October 2006 17:02
Firstly: Such a bittersweet ending to this story (so far). Aex had to leave, but left on her own two feet and on good terms. But Zoe's comments to Mal at the end were perfect. I think we're all proud of him in this. Proud of Alex too, getting through what she did, that took some unflinching gusto!

Proud of you too ShinyTrinket! Enjoying reading it? Never! LOVING reading it would be more accurate. This series has everything, from pitch perfect characterisation to the cliffhanger endings (you're evil for that, by the way), it's all done so incredibly well.

And now it's all gonna continue! Well I'll be a moonbrained crazy girl if I'm not giddy with excitement as I type!

I await with baited breath and much impatience, Bravo! *cue much clapping and cheers*
Friday, 27 October 2006 17:17
*echoes BornToFly's claps* Are you really going to tie into the BDM the way it appears you might? It'd be shiny if you did...
Friday, 27 October 2006 17:44
This was definitely a bittersweet end to this story. I feel bad for Alex and Mal that she couldn't stay so that Mal could be with her during the pregnancy, after everything else she's survived ...

But still, I am proud of all of them and will be eager to see part 3.
Friday, 27 October 2006 18:09
i really enjoyed the story. I'm wondering if Alex will feature in the third part as well, maybe when she gives birth to Mal jr!?
Friday, 27 October 2006 18:28
Wow...that was quite the ending you got here, ShinyTrinket! Especially loved the Mal/Alex moments and Jayne sweeping Alex off her feet to carry her over to Mrs. Edson...he's such a good boy when he wants to be;D

BEB
Saturday, 28 October 2006 16:48
Excellent story. I'm sorry to see it end, but excited that you are planning more. Personally, I think both Alex and Mal have some very unresolved issues, individually and together.

Great job on this. Excellent characterization and emotion. Anxiously awaiting the new story!

vaughn
Saturday, 28 October 2006 20:47
Loved this from first word to last, kind of sorry to see this part end though I am champing at the bit to read Part III! I thought the whole thing was handled beautifully, loved the way Mal was with Alex and hope we get to meet the new little one when the baby arrives. Also liked the dialogue between Zoe and Mal. My only complaint is that it could have been longer, LOL. Thanks for another great story, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 31 October 2006 13:34
As has been stated several times already, I was sad to see this story end. But it ended on a good note. Is there any body part that Mal hasn't had shot or stabbed?


"Monastic humor. I miss all the fun. And all the food..."


Rob O.
SUVIE
Thursday, 30 August 2007 20:26
Just finished reading Part 1 & 2, how's part 3 coming along? too subtle of a hint ;-)

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