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NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 32

Tuesday, October 24, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 32: River sings a song, Alex goes to work, and the job - what else? - doesn't go smooth!

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Disclaimers : Everything belongs to Joss, except for one character of my creation.

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When she woke it was to singing; a female voice singing, softly, nearby.

She tried to open her eyes, but a piercingly bright light caused her to squeeze them shut tightly once more against its harshness. As she gradually pushed aside the fog in her head, she became aware of something touching her, resting on her belly.

She willed her eyes open then, and in the intense light of the room made out someone sitting next to her. She squinted and blinked the figure into focus.

It was River, and she appeared not to notice at first that Alex had awakened. She was singing quietly, something that sounded to Alex like a lullaby, and was looking at Alex’s abdomen as she sang. Alex realized it was River’s hand she could feel resting lightly on her. She also realized the bright lights surrounding her were the lights of the infirmary and that she was on the table.

“Hey,” she said groggily, propping herself up on her elbows.

River looked at her and smiled serenely, the song trailing off to a hum.

“What are you doing?” Alex tried to be as nonchalant as she could, but she was terribly confused.

“Babysitting,” River replied. She looked down and smiled at Alex’s belly. “Somebody had to watch the baby while you were gone.”

River’s tone was matter-of-fact, and Alex nodded, unsure what to say. She looked around for Simon or anyone else, but she and River were alone.

“Thanks?” she finally ventured.

River patted Alex’s belly and then removed her hand.

“Baby’s asleep now,” she said. She lowered her voice to a hushed whisper. Her face was peaceful, and she looked at Alex’s belly with what seemed to be almost an expression of love. Then she looked up at Alex, her face growing solemn.

“It’s okay,” she said reassuringly. “Baby’s all right. They didn’t hurt him.”

“Him?”

River nodded.

“Who him?”

River pointed to Alex’s belly.

Comments
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 21:50
How the hell did Mal get shot in the ass? And wasn't he there when Alex passed out?

Anyway ... I loved this and I feel awful for Alex ... she's having such a hard time. I really hope that when Mal isn't drugged up, he can help her.
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 23:32
I LMAO, Jayne had the funniest lines and I could just see the crew reacting this way. Different had he been shot anywhere else. I liked how you had Alex yell like that startling everybody and Mal's reaction was just so funny. Can't wait for the next part of this shiny story. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 25 October 2006 05:25
Jayne and Wash were and absolute riot! I could so see Jayne being the funny one in that situation.

I love it that Mal's reaction to Alex's outburst was so humorous, because I think that after that little tizzy she threw, it was perfect Mal to be kinda not the mean old man he says he is.

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love this series.
Thursday, 26 October 2006 03:24
This chapter is totally nuts! At first, I was worried about Alex and when she started having more flashbacks to her rape at the prison, I was just waiting for something to trigger a violent outburst...

But Mal getting shot in the ass?!? Now that's just freaking hilarious! Definitely thought every one was spot on in their voices and dialogue. Even when Alex flipped out...

Still...I gotta ask: while I don't think you did this intentionally...was Alex's bomb-dropper adapted from Nathan's adlibbed "Don't tell me...!" line from the BDM outtakes? Cuz for some reason, I flashed to that instead of what probably should have been going through my head:S

BEB
Thursday, 26 October 2006 03:40
Quote:

Still...I gotta ask: while I don't think you did this intentionally...was Alex's bomb-dropper adapted from Nathan's adlibbed "Don't tell me...!" line from the BDM outtakes? Cuz for some reason, I flashed to that instead of what probably should have been going through my head:S


Yup! glad somebody got that. Just a little nod to those wonderful BDM outtakes!

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