Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 25

Thursday, October 19, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 25: It's the evening meal. Mal hits a low...Jayne almost gets hit...and then everything changes.

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Tension was palpable at the evening meal. Everyone knew the test results had come back, and, although Simon didn’t say a word to the others about the outcome, one look at Mal told them all they needed to know. He came late to the table, wordlessly and with puffy eyes. Zoë, Wash and Kaylee exchanged furtive, worried glances at his appearance. Book regarded him silently, studying his face carefully as he sat down.

To make matters worse, it was to be Inara’s final night on the ship. She had joined them for dinner, but was very quiet and looked as though she might cry at any moment.

Mal finally broke the silence, directing his attention to Inara. “We should reach the training house mid-morning tomorrow.” His voice was subdued and husky. “Might wanna ‘wave your girls, let someone know to meet us at the dock.”

Inara nodded, looking up at him only long enough to acknowledge that he had spoken. Kaylee reached over and squeezed her shoulder, and Inara smiled at her, a small, thin smile.

“So,” Jayne said, in his own misguided attempt to ease the stress, “Do we get to meet your girls, ‘Nara—maybe...give ‘em a real-world lesson?” He grinned a hopeful, cockeyed grin.

Inara smiled up at him patiently.

“I’m sorry, I think your world is a little too real for them right now,” she said, trying her best to sound lighthearted and teasing. The others chuckled, grateful to have the tension broken even a little.

“I’m afraid one look into Jayne’s world, and there’d be a mass career change underway there!” Wash threw in, and then the laughter was more genuine.

“Ha ha ha! Go on, have a laugh at ol’ Jayne’s expense!” Jayne growled, but he didn’t sound angry. Then his expres

Comments
Thursday, 19 October 2006 04:17
YESSS!!!! Alex FINALLY wakes up! It was so cool to see Simon take charge there, I though Mal would have completely ignored him.

Great chapter...brilliant actually. Chapter 24 rocked the socks too.

Can't wait to see the conversation between Mal and Alex about the baby...damn you're good with tension.
Thursday, 19 October 2006 06:23
Huzzah! Alex is awake and not suffering from anything worse than the pains of her injuries and the memories of what happened to her. So expecting a "Alex gets amnesia" plot twist. Glad you took the harder path, ShinyTrinket:D

Personally? I wanna see a conversation between Inara and Alex. After the conversation between Mal and Alex about the baby...but I want to see these two woman have a nice frank talk about things. Cuz Inara needs to know some things about what went on while she was off on a job:(

BEB
Thursday, 19 October 2006 11:05
Hooray, I can keep reading this story because you DIDN'T KILL ALEX! That would have been so mean it would have redefined the word. Doing a little happy dance now. Glad too that the baby is still alive, I was fearing with all the mama's trauma the little one would be the first casualty but now things are looking up a bit and about time too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 19 October 2006 13:32
Excellent chapter. Wow we get the whole range of emotions on this one, especially with Mal, rage one minute, touching concern the next. Wonderful job!

vaughn

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