Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Out of the Frying Pan: Ch. 5

Monday, October 16, 2006

Surgery! Flashbacks! Mind-reading! Simon gets punched! Oh, just read the freakin' thing. Features a bit of non-graphic (gasp!) Simon/Kaylee lovin', so I'm rating it R just to be on the safe side. See, folks? Fair warning.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3852    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Hey Doc?" Mal stood in the doorway to the infirmary. "Just wanted to let you know we'll be hitting atmo in about ten minutes, and your sister's at the controls, so brace yourself."

"I heard that." River said over the comm.

Mal shuddered. "I hate when she does that. What you got there?"

"X-rays." Simon replied. "I wanted to take a look at Penny's lungs and make sure they weren't affected by the attack. They don't appear to have been."

"That's good." Mal said. He stepped fully into the room. "Pretty girl. What was it she'd been up to since you saw her last?"

"Her sister told me she took over as the local midwife after their aunt died about a year ago. That didn't surprise me too much, her interest in medicine always seemed genuine." Simon replied.

"So, she was pretty tough, huh?" Mal observed. "Back when she was a honey trap, I mean. Hope she remembers enough of that training to teach that husband of hers a lesson when she gets home."

Simon chuckled at the thought. Michel was about the same size as Jayne, but he had no doubt that Penny could drop him easily. "I'm fairly surprised she hasn't already..." He trailed off and looked closer at the x-ray he was holding up. " Ai-ya tyen-ah. "

"Something wrong?" Mal asked.

"She's got three broken ribs, here, here, and here." Simon said, pointing. "These two have already started to heal. And right here, this one appears to have fully healed. These are old fractures, they didn't happen in the attack."

"Her husband?" Mal looked as disturbed as Simon was feeling.

Simon shook his head. "I don't know what else they could be from. But it doesn't make any sense, the Penny I knew wouldn't have let a man who raised a hand to her live, let alone hit her more than once."

"People can change." Mal pointed out. "Not always for the better."

"I just can't imagine..." Simon stopped himself again. "Listen to me, talking about her like I really know her. I'm not sure she even really knows herself."

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An hour after

Comments
Monday, 16 October 2006 06:10
Hurrah! I was very excited to see you updated. As always, well written, I look forward to the next chapter.
DEYVRA
Monday, 16 October 2006 07:08
Great chapter! You did a wonderful job showing the "quiet" time Simon and Kaylee share after their lovemaking. It was so sweet! I enjoy your description of what River senses from everyone; even a fetus. That was very nicely done. Penny punching Simon was just too funny! I take it that yes, she does know who he is!!
Monday, 16 October 2006 11:54
That was great! I love your internal musings of both Simon and Kaylee, it gives us a great understanding of them both.

One question: How could Kaylee be pregnant for three months and not know? That seems like a long time to not put the pieces together ..

But I'm thrilled that Simon will get his wish to father her children - I'm just a bit worried about what's going to happen when he finds out Penny's secret. I'm assuming it's that the baby really was his all those years ago and now he has a child somewhere in the 'verse ... that's going to kill him.

And Penny's punch - didn't see it coming, but that was just great!
Monday, 16 October 2006 12:24
I'm laughing so much right now, that punch was hilarious.
Monday, 16 October 2006 12:53
LMAO, great chapter. I can't wait to see the aftermath of the punch. Please don't take to long giving us that. If you keep on taking so long I'm gonna have to ask you to stop spoiling me, cause I get so impatient... lol
Monday, 16 October 2006 13:44
TamSibling: The reasons why Kaylee hasn't figured out by now that she's pregnant will be covered VERY soon.

As for Penny's secret, well...you know what they say about assumptions. They make an ass out of you and...sumptions. Wait, that's not right...
Tuesday, 17 October 2006 05:07
Oh...that's totally a Joss moment with Simon getting sucker punched. And by a bed-ridden patient too!

;D

Definitely loving this series to bits FrellingBlonde! Though I wanna know how Kaylee and Simon have been missing the signals for 3 months. Cuz if not Kaylee...Simon's a doctor for Christ's sake!

BEB
Sunday, 22 October 2006 18:15
Frell, from the first descriptive bits, "Surgery! Flashbacks! Mind-reading! Simon gets punched! Oh, just read the freakin' thing." to the last sentence: "By way of an answer, a small fist shot up suddenly, catching him right on the chin.", I am loving this chapter. And I SCRUPULOUSLY agree about the new special hell for non-commenters. :0) You did good work here, Frell. Excellent R-work and it's good, no it's grand to see you go for something a tad less moist and hot, though you DO do the moist heat thoroughly well, babe. Thank you for an enjoyable read that flowed along just like a good ff ep would.
MADDADDAM
Saturday, 04 November 2006 20:14
ha HA! "Fight or flight" vs. "Recognition and response". Nice little sling-shot ending, Frell. Good tension! You're using all the right moves in all the right places, just like Simon's ministrations of Kaylee. And, in response, you've got my juices flowing, yeeeah! Keep it up...I know I will! shhhhTAH!

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