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Out of the Frying Pan: Ch. 3

Friday, August 4, 2006

The crew arrives on Bayou, meets up with an "old friend," and gets more answers than they really wanted. Simon/Kaylee, embarassingly PG. Next chapter will be a return to the smut, I promise.

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Roughly halfway between the innermost Core planets and the furthest Border worlds, Bayou was a planet of extreme wealth, extreme poverty, and everything in between. The first settlers had mostly been from an Earth That Was city called New Orleans, and the cities bore a strong resemblance to pictures of it that could be found on the Cortex. Most of the people living on the small planet were descendants of the original settlers, and usually called themselves Cajuns.

Serenity touched down outside Lafeyette settlement, a mostly middle-class village on the outskirts Orleans City, the captial. The streets that led away from the docks were lined with tall trees and modest houses, most of them white with wrought iron fences outside. Kaylee marveled at the beautiful gardens in front of most of the houses. The place had an old-fashioned, laid-back sort of elegance and charm to it.

The Mule stopped in front of a house at the end of one street. It was small, but still quite lovely, with a porch wrapping around to the back and a garden that seemed to take up most of the lawn, made up of different varieties of flowers, all in red.

"She always did seem to have a fixation with red." Simon told Kaylee, absently running his hand across a deep crimson, almost black rose that hung out from its bush over the walkway.

At the front door, the crew was met by a tall, broad-shouldered man who looked to be in his early thirties. "Dr. Tam?"

"That's me." Simon cleared his throat as he stepped forward.

"Michel Bouchard." The man replied in a heavy Cajun accent, extending his hand. "Penny's husband. Can't thank you enough for being here."

"Of course." Simon couldn't help but feel awkward. "This is my fiancee, Kaylee, my sister, River, and the rest of the crew." He cleared his throat. "Can you tell me exactly what happened to Penelope?"

Michel looked confused for a moment. "Oh! You mean Penny, right. No one's called her Penelope for a long while, longer than I've known her. Well, what happened is I came home two

Comments
Friday, 04 August 2006 03:01
Great chapter! Definitely setting up for some serious angst and action in the upcoming ones. I can't wait to see more of Penny's backstory, and I certainly hope Mirielle and Michel get what's coming to them.

Keep up the great work!
Sunday, 06 August 2006 06:14
Oh...things have just taken another fun turn to the lovely side of interesting, haven't they?

;)

Wonderful chapter you have here, FrellingBlonde! Gotta wonder how much guilt is flowing through the heads of Michel and Mirelle right now...their illicit affair both saved them and almost doomed Penny:(

Still...can't wait for part 4 and how the crew helps Penny out:D

BEB
Monday, 07 August 2006 04:30
Shiny
Tuesday, 08 August 2006 18:44
Wow, wow, wow!

There were so many great touches in this story Frell!

I loved the opening few paragraphs. The descriptions of Buyou was really atmospheric.

The introduction of the Operative was clever. I loved the comment about Simon's parents too.

The character voices were bang on, the plot is engrossing and I want to read more now.

Top notch writing Frell. I'm looking forward to the next instalment!

- Cos.
Thursday, 10 August 2006 07:44
VERY good stuff, FB! Love this bit, though the whole gorram deal shows your talent in a big way: The Operative turned to him slowly, calmly. "That broadwave shattered every belief I could ever recall holding. At first, taking my own life seemed like the only option I had. But I realized that I couldn't. Not with the blood of thousands, perhaps millions of innocents who died because of the Alliance's deceit and brutality on my hands."


"I see. And after you avenge those innocents, you planning to throw yourself on your sword?" Mal asked.

Your pervy works are truly awesome, but this is fantastic too! Thanks for reading me and for letting me read you too.
BOHEMIANBABE
Saturday, 19 August 2006 04:03
I do love when you do pure plot stories! There is no doubt that you are a great writer! keep on working i'm ready for more!

love ya
Monday, 28 August 2006 22:25
Awesome plot..I'm looking forward to where it's going. I especially enjoyed your portrayal of the operative.
Wednesday, 27 September 2006 21:19
I have to agree with everyone here, this is just great. I feel very sorry for Penny's kids, having to be bossed around by Penny's sister. The boy was worried about his mother, no reason to yell at him like that!

I like that Kaylee's feeling protective of Penny, shows that she's secure in hers and Simon's relationship. Jealousy is often a sign of distrust and Kaylee trusts Simon completely :) Really great, please don't let it be long between the chapters, k?
MADDADDAM
Saturday, 04 November 2006 03:18
This stuff proves tempered metal, Frell. It's fleshed out nicely and the prose flows quite smoothly. The medical info. is quite accurate and, even down to the ecchymosis from vast, global internal bleeding, is a delight to come across..and it all nestles quite well in the arms of your prose. Again, well done!

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