Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Out of the Frying Pan: Ch. 1

Saturday, July 15, 2006

A continuation of the Motivation Series. After Miranda, the warrants for Simon and River were revoked, and the crew thought they were safe. Turns out? Not so much! Simon/Kaylee, NC-17. Yes, that's right, porn WITH plot...or is it plot with porn...eh, just read it!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4594    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Denis, time for bed."

The little boy pouted at his mother's words. "Not sleepy, Mama."

"Yes, you are." Penny chided affectionately, shifting the weight of the baby on her hip.

"Just till Papa get home?" Denis pleaded.

"Not tonight, petit prince . Papa might be home late." Penny managed to keep the bitterness out of her voice.

Denis continued pouting, but allowed his mother to lead him to his bedroom, and changed into his pajamas before kneeling down beside his bed to say his prayers.

Penny just focused on her ten-month-old daughter, Coralie. Prayers sounded empty and hollow to her. She kissed the baby on her forehead and lay her in her crib, then turned back to her son, smiling when she saw he was already in bed, and his little eyes were already closing. She gently stroked his dark hair and leaned down to give him a kiss on the cheek.

In her own room, she undressed quickly and pulled a thin cotton slip over her head. She slid between the covers on the double bed, knowing that she would probably be the only one sleeping in it once again.

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"Bouchard." The tall, dark-suited man said to his accomplice, reading the sign on the fence post. "This is the place."

The two men moved like ghosts into the small house, through the kitchen, down the hall, into the bedroom. The sleeping woman in the bed didn't even stir as they approached her.

"She looks harmless." The first man observed as he reached into his pocket. They both knew the young woman was anything but harmless.

"It's almost a shame." The second man said, almost to himself. "She's really quite lovely."

The first man withdrew his blue-gloved hand from his pocket, clutching a thin, cylindrical object. With one press of a button, it began to emit a blue glow and a low, eerie humming sound.

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The pain was sharp enough to jolt her out of a deep sleep. It started in her head, hot and piercing. It spread over her limbs, an unbearable prickling sensation. What was

Comments
Saturday, 15 July 2006 17:41
The BlueHand bit at the beginning was somewhat creepy.

Also creepy about the conversation with the Operative at the end.

Looks to be some good plot in this one, hopefully not to much distracted by the smut.
Saturday, 15 July 2006 21:30
Oh boy...the HoBs are picking up the pace of their little hunt, aren't they?

:(

Still...gotta love Silee PWP;)

BEB
Saturday, 15 July 2006 21:48
Good to see some more of the plot take shape. Of course the S/K lovin' was hot, but that goes without saying. I find it interesting that the Operative is contacting Mal. . . ulterior motive. . . or is this man related to Penny in some way . . .
MADDADDAM
Saturday, 15 July 2006 22:34
Wonderful, Frell....this one's moving at a nice clip. I love the scene cuts you made at the beginning between the predators and their prey....created some vivid imagery and real genuine movement within the readers perspective...which i love.

The passion b/w Simon and Kaylee is still the tempest it has been AND he seems to be developing skill...knowledge...really exploring Kaylee and what she likes.

I'll be eager to launch into the crew's next wave of pending danger. I can already see the water retreating from the beach...and what's that mounting on the horizon??!
Sunday, 16 July 2006 12:54
Shiny
Sunday, 16 July 2006 21:06
Flippin' heck!
Porn, tension, humour and creepiness all in one chapter?

Another big shiny thumbs up!
Monday, 17 July 2006 04:26
Tsk tsk! I'm surprised one seems to have commented on the REAL reason for Kaylee's...stomach troubles. You're all as oblivious as Simon and Kaylee! ;-P
Tuesday, 25 July 2006 02:46
That was a great chapter! And dude, I SO know the REAL reason for Kaylee's illness, I just don't know if you want me to give it away or not. ;)

Keep it up, I love how suspenseful this story is. I definitely can't wait to read more!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 02:41
So, FB. I AM needful of late, especially needful, in fact, so maybe that contributes to the extreme enjoyment I'm getting out of your Silee, even though I'm a Jaylee Girl, but DANG! This is shiny as heck: "Simon kissed his way up the back of her neck. "Good morning, ai ren." He grinned when she grabbed his hand and guided it under the blankets, between her thighs. Taking the hint, he slipped his fingers between her damp folds, stroking gently at first, then slipping a finger inside her, lightly pressing his thumb against her clit.

Kaylee moaned, squeezing her thighs together to keep his hand where it was. She rocked her hips, grinding her backside against his swelling cock, and smirked when he groaned and pushed another finger into her." Nah, it ain't just my needfulness. The whole gorram chapter is masterfully done. You have a swai way with plot, characterization, love the names you choose for side people, and omg, the sex is terrific and mind-blowing. Love this. Going to chapter two now.
LIRGSXELA
Thursday, 27 July 2006 06:49
'kay, I'll keep this short to make sure I say it right: Joss needs to call you and talk about your ideas, because you could write another movie or series. Honestly.
BOHEMIANBABE
Saturday, 19 August 2006 03:48
Amazing! lots of plot!@ better than you normally do!

love ya
Wednesday, 27 September 2006 20:50
Frell, honey, you do remember that you gave away the reason for Kaylee's stomach problems way back the last series... lol...

Yay, Penny's here, finally everything you've been talking about is happening :D
Thursday, 28 September 2006 14:36
Of course I remember...just wasn't sure if the rest of you did :P

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