Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 20

Saturday, October 14, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 20: Mal's morose, Kaylee's mad, River's cryptic and Jayne's still clueless.

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Mal’s mood was the gloomiest anyone had seen in a good long while. Once Serenity got off the ground, he sat silently on the bridge for a while, then went to his bunk and stayed there. He was conspicuously absent from the evening meal.

“Where’s Inara?” Book asked. “She hasn’t been out and about this afternoon, either.”

“Maybe Kaylee can tell us,” Jayne suggested. “She and ‘Nara come stormin’ in the bay this morning lookin’ like they was bein’ chased by killer bees.”

Kaylee looked at Simon accusingly. Simon dropped his chopsticks in exasperation.

“How many times do I have to say I’m sorry?” he demanded. “I was working on the papers—how was I supposed to know Inara was gonna walk over there and start reading?”

The others all looked puzzled.

“What’s going on?” Book asked.

Kaylee shook her head and didn’t answer.

“Let’s just say Inara saw something she shouldn’t have, and it’s apparently all my fault.” Simon glared at Kaylee.

“You shouldn’ta been so careless, leavin’ stuff layin’ about like that,” Kaylee chided him.

“Kaylee, it was my work space ,” Simon shot back.

“So what’s Inara got to do with Mal disappearin’?” Jayne asked.

Wash snorted. “How long have you been on this ship? Don’t you see anything ?” Then he looked around, frowning. “So, what is going on?”

“Ripples,” River suddenly interjected. “Like tossing a pebble in a pond.” She looked around the table to make sure everyone was getting it. “You think it just sinks and goes away. But it doesn’t. It makes ripples...they go out, and pretty soon everything moves.”

She looked from one uncomprehending face to the next.

“He thought it wouldn’t mean anything...but it means everything.” River had been smiling, but the smile faded. “ She knows what it means,” she continued, looking sad. “She knows it moved everything

Comments
Saturday, 14 October 2006 23:04
Oh my sweetness! Beautifully done. I like that Kaylee and Simon don't have a fairytale love affair going on. They still have it out a little. You handled Simon's sarcasm very well.

Keep up the good work.


"Preacher, you got a smutty mind!

Rob O.
Sunday, 15 October 2006 02:19
I liked this ... although I feel awful for Alex. And I too liked Simon and Kaylee's fight, but also its resolution. It seemed appropriate.
Sunday, 15 October 2006 08:04
This just keeps getting better and better.

A nice little peek at some fluffier stuff to break up all the doom and gloom. A nice respite if I do say so myself.
Sunday, 15 October 2006 15:50
I'm still following along, and boy have you thrown in some twists and turns. Very nicely done!

Love the emotion that you throw in. You have the characters down.
vaughn
Monday, 16 October 2006 15:36
Well now...wonder of all wonders, Simon can talk with Kaylee without spewing gibberish and wacky sentences. He just has to be wielding his caustic wit;)

I can understand Inara's point...but she did just violate Alex's privacy and Simon's work. Karma just prove it's point, sadly:(

Still...I can't wait to read the next part;D

BEB
Monday, 16 October 2006 22:46
Wow, so sad all round. I don't want Alex to die but you do seem to be setting us up for a terrible fall. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me

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