Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 19

Friday, October 13, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 19: As the crew prepares to depart Haven, Inara sees something she wasn't supposed to see.

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Inara and Kaylee were talking in the cargo bay the next morning when Simon came in and took the stretcher off the wall.

“What’s that for?” Kaylee asked.

“We’re moving the nurse back to the ship. Captain wants to leave for Boros, now that we know where her people are.”

Kaylee and Inara walked with him down the hill to the clinic.

“You found her family?”

“Her mother found us,” Simon said. “’Waved during the night, actually.”

Mal was already in the clinic. Simon had disconnected Alex and had her ready to go. The fluid samples and vials of Mal’s blood were on the counter, waiting to be sent to a lab for analysis.

Inara addressed Mal. “So, we’re headed to Boros?”

“Yeah, but we’ll get you to the training house first.”

“Mal, you don’t have to make the stop, if you need to get her home,” Inara said.

Mal shook his head firmly.

“Inara, I already broke one promise to you, ain’t gonna break another. You’re our first stop.” He helped Simon lift Alex onto the stretcher. “Could use your help, though, long as you’re here. Grab that, if you will.” He gestured toward Alex’s IV fluid bag, then rolled up his sleeves before lifting his end of the stretcher.

Inara frowned as she saw the bandage on the inside of his arm. “What’s that?”

Mal looked down. “That? Oh, um—the doc took some blood, is all.”

Inara looked concerned.

“Are you all right? You’re not sick, are you?”

Mal suddenly looked uneasy. “Uh, no. I mean, not really. I felt a little punk, is all, so he took a look. It’s nothin’.”

Inara picked up Alex’s IV bag from the counter, intending to carry it out; and then her eyes went to the vials of fluid and blood beside it. She fell silent as she looked fro

Comments
Friday, 13 October 2006 22:48
Oh...gotta love that assertion: "I <i>love</i> my Captain." As in "The man's like family to me...but damn does he pull stupid shit!" But that is what really helps sell this chapter in the end...Kaylee's frustration and pain of not liking Mal's decision, but knowing that this would happen if Inara was told:(

A-1 job once again, ShinyTrinket:D

BEB
Friday, 13 October 2006 22:53
Beautiful writing. I love the emotion, as well as Inara's attempt to hide it from the men-folk. So much for HIPPA patient privacy laws 500 years from now...


"If anything happens, just remember, I love you."

Rob O.
Saturday, 14 October 2006 15:48
Mal. Mal Mal Mal. When will he learn? Surely even he (dumb as he is) knew that he couldn't keep something THIS BIG from Inara. Silly man, she would have found out one way or another, so lying to her face, especially when the proof of the truth is just a few feet away, is just damn foolish. Not that it should have come to that; he should have owned up the moment it became an issue, and that way they all first discovered Alex was pregnant.

Another flawless chapter. Great characterisation, and it's imbued woth so much and so perfect emotion, it's almost tangible. Kudos ShinyTrinket, Kudos in a big, big way.

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