Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 16

Wednesday, October 11, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 16: The crew gets some down time on Haven, but it's anything but a break for Mal. Simon presents Mal with an unexpected option to consider.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2423    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Haven lived up to its name. The small mining community was known for taking in the occasional Browncoat fugitive if the price was right. That included several of Mal and Zoë’s wartime associates. Those friends ‘waved them once in awhile if they needed a favor, usually transport for someone to or from the moon. Now, they were returning the favor to the crew of Serenity by loaning Simon use of their clinic for the tests he needed to run.

Haven would also serve as a place for the crew to get some down time. It would not be the leave time Mal had promised them, but it would be something. They could relax with friends while Simon assessed Alex’s condition and he and Mal figured out what to do.

For Mal it felt like anything but a haven. He couldn’t think of a time in his life that he had felt pulled in so many directions. He wondered how thin he was capable of being spread. Going to the prison in search of Alex held many unknowns; and he thought he had prepared himself for all the possibilities. He hoped they would find her alive, but he had steeled himself for the very real likelihood they would not. He knew there was a chance they might not find her at all. But THIS...never in three lifetimes had the situation in front of him entered his thoughts. The implications—no matter what the outcome—were so immense that he refused to even let his mind go there. Not until he had more information.

So he thought about the more immediate problems at hand.

He had made promises to his crew that he needed to keep—and to Inara as well. He had promised her she would be the first stop after Zargon, no matter what they found there. Now, here they were on Haven, nowhere near where Inara needed to be. One promise broken already, and who knew what lay ahead?

Inara had assured him she understood, that she would have it

Comments
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 22:48
I have to say, you're handling the situation quite well. Your medical jargon is impressive. As always, your characterization is nearly dead-on. And you have nothing to be jealous of in terms of my dialogue. Your's is quite good, as well.

"Would be you get most poetical about your pecker."

Rob O.
Thursday, 12 October 2006 11:50
Not really sure why Mal is so afraid of Inara finding out he had been intimate to Inara, it's not as if he and Inara are an item in this story. I surely hope Alex pulls through, looks good so far. That was typical of Simon to go and get his food and bring it back so he wouldn't be away from his patient any longer than he could possibly avoid. He is so dedicated and that's what makes him such a brilliant surgeon. I also liked how he tried to ease the Captain's mind some as well. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 October 2006 22:27
I dunno, Alison...I get the feeling that while Mal isn't completely aware about how Inara feels about his single night of intimacy with Nandi...he is certainly aware that if the woman he cares about knows he's been dipping his wick elsewhere, it won't matter if they are together. She will lay him open;(

Still...this was damn wonderful work, ShinyTrinket! I especially loved the "will he/won't he?" moment after Simon offers to do a paternity test to assuage Mal's fears (or confirm them). Mal's response was the kicker though...you just gotta know he's aching to have confirmation of what he thinks is his kid, but he isn't gonna violate Alex's privacy:)

BEB

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