Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

NOTHIN' IN THE 'VERSE - PART II: Chapter 12

Monday, October 9, 2006

Takes place after the events of the series and before the BDM, and a few months after "Nothin' In The 'Verse Part I".
The return of a former passenger to Serenity causes conflict among the crew - and creates a problem for Mal that he is unprepared to deal with.-------CHAPTER 12: Jayne takes a walk in the woods.

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**Mousing over the Chinese should reveal the English translations on most browsers. If not, translations follow the story.

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The snow was deep, and the going was slow. Jayne walked the fencerow at the rear of the prison property. The fence was about the only thing left standing intact after the riots and fires gutted most of the buildings. Guards stood at intervals along the inside. A couple of them looked Jayne over, but, as Logan had promised, no one bothered him, as he was outside the prison grounds.

He looked up the fence, at the roll of razor wire along the top. Pieces of fabric fluttered along the wire in places. Jayne shuddered, thinking of the poor bastards who were so desperate to escape they shredded themselves going over. If they hadn’t bled to death in the woods after that then God or someone was really looking out for them.

Jayne sighed and shook his head. Where to even start in this go tsao de mess? He surveyed the tree line downhill from the fence. The woods stretched out interminably before him. To say it would be like looking for a needle in a haystack would be the understatement of a lifetime.

Pick a place to start, he told himself. Y’aint gonna give it but a quick once-over anyhow. Just need to be able to go back and tell Mal you tried.

Jayne didn’t figure he needed to try terribly hard, because he knew they weren’t going to find her. The chances of her being out here beyond the prison walls were slim; the chances of them actually finding her even if she was got considerably slimmer yet. Most likely she had burned up in the fires that consumed the buildings inside the fence, if the rioting prisoners hadn’t gotten to her first. One small woman didn’t stand much of a chance against the sheer number of

Comments
Monday, 09 October 2006 01:39
Interesting choice to have Jayne find her, when he was the one who didn't want to look in the first place!

Good chapter!
Monday, 09 October 2006 03:19
Fantastic. I wasn't sure just how long you'd make us wait... Poetic that Jayne should find her, not to mention give her some props. He knows a survivor when he sees one.

Beautiful writing. Your style keeps getting better and better.

"A man walks down the street wearing that, you know he's not afraid of anything."

Rob O.
Monday, 09 October 2006 09:57
Brilliant chapter!

It's nice to know that Alex isn't dead!...yet.

More, More, More.
Monday, 09 October 2006 19:44
Oh Wow, so very happy they found her. Although it would have been great if it had been Mal that found her this makes sense with Jayne being a tracker but also with him being just going through the motions then finding her by accident, it was like fate was kicking him in the *pigu* for not having faith. I surely hope they can bring her back though my oh my you sure cut it fine. Lucky the Captain is a stubborn *hundan* or they wouldn't have looked for her at all. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 17:39
Total poetic irony to have Jayne find Alex's body like that, Shiny;D

Gotta wonder if some higher power wasn't trying to operate a 2-4-1 deal of saving Alex and teaching Jayne some faith in others:)

BEB

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