Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

C.C.M Ch 11

Sunday, October 8, 2006

Again, with the delay, again with the apologies...hope it's worth it. The Alliance are here! (Cue fanfares and some of that ticker tape...)

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Mal mouths ‘Please?’ to Zoe. She shrugs, non-plussed.

Rest of the crew come tumbling up onto the bridge to find out the game plan. Last up are Jayne and Ilargia. Jayne is doing his shirt up, scowls at Mal.

“You pick the worst gorram moments to go finding trouble...”

Mal stares at him. Then he looks at Ilargia. She glares back.

“Just performing one of my useful functions, Captain.”

Mal winces.

“You ain’t gonna let that go in a hurry, are you?”

“No.” Looks out of the window. “But I’m prepared to suspend hostilities for the moment.”

“Don’t suppose you know these folk?” Mal asks. She takes him seriously.

“Sorry, Captain. My contacts are all admin or customs.” Takes a longer, considering look. “That’s a new ship, but an old design. They mothballed that class about ten years back.”

River allows the usual surroundings to fade out around her, puts away the familiar feel and sound of them. Very gently, she stretches out her new senses, a tentative reaching. She’s expecting a weight and clamour of minds, but finds instead vast emptiness, small knots of cognition. There are barely two hundred people aboard that leviathan. Part of her mind begins to ruthlessly devise a scheme of elimination, and she wrestles it down. Some of those minds are scared, young and unformed. They feel like Tyler. A handful are more complex, stronger. She searches for the mind in charge, follows the tendril of consciousness back to the source. A worried man, mind a jumble of concern, juggling ship and crew and mission. She knows this kind of mind, though it lacks the bleak darkness that threads through Mal when he allows himself to relax...

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Treutlen, who remembers when you didn’t need an electronics degree to operate your own radio, prods distrustfully at the buttons some more.

“Do you think they got that, Upson?”

“I expect so, Sir.” Upson, one of whose degrees is in electronics, fights the urge to bat his superior’s hands away from the sensitive cont

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Sunday, 08 October 2006 19:19
The library thing happened to me. Everything else has gone by the way, but I am still a Reader at the British Library, even though I've been out of Uni and walking the world for quite a spell now. Technically, I can get my mitts on anything ever published in the UK. (This does include the Domesday Book.)
Monday, 09 October 2006 21:22
Well, well. Simon's all dressed up like an arcie. That brings a pleasant image to mind, especially with the naked torso and grease. I could just feel Simon's hatred of that. Though I wonder if Kaylee might find it a little more than desirable.

Ilargia is quickly becoming indispensable to this crew. Her intelligence is proving quite a boon and is useful at helping to save their hides. Should show Mal that she's more than a food/bed warmer.

River as a bratty teen was classic. I can picture her so clearly, complete with gum popping. Brilliant. I would also wonder just what that might do to her romantic intentions towards the Captain. He might be feeling a bit old, but to have her as his "daughter" sets out his age right in front of him.

And it was great to see Tyler proving to the crew that the Cobbs are not idiots and totally dumb. Nor are they lacking in morals. Most everyone needed to see that.

My imagination is roaming on where you're going next with my favourite couple. Can't hardly wait to get there.
Monday, 09 October 2006 21:33
It's back! It's back! You can't see it, but I'm doing the "it's back" dance right now. I've been checking most faithfully for updates.

How do I love this chapter? Let me count the ways:

1. River as the typical gum-smacking teen was brilliant.

2. I love Largi calling Mal (or anyone else) out.

3. I think Zoe was/is a very believable captain. In fact, I think you often capture Zoe quite well. She's only around in snippets but they are done true to character.

Sooooo looking forward to what comes next.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 03:50
Mighty glad you're back in the saddle again, SpaceAnJL! Definitely loved this chapter, as 'Gia and Tyler really proved their worth in keeping Serenity from another mad chase with an Alliance cruiser;)

And who knows...maybe River's got a bit of kink of her...ya know, a bit "Spank me, Daddy!"

;D

BEB
Sunday, 16 September 2007 21:44
just catching up on these - and really enjoying them too SA!

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